It could use a bit more work on the technical side, but the flow of this one was well-executed. You were able to show how Zeke and Cy's relationship (also Damien's regard for Az) was like through the dialogue. Zeke seems like love. XD
MALI YUN FIRST, DON'T REP.dadomzMay 5 2006, 05:07:43 UTC
Technical in what manner? Grammar-wise (*scratches head, no clue*)?
Yeah the flow was meant to be short and concise and not at all revealing because I wanted to experiment with the obscure and concealed writing style wherein it didn't showcase much exposition (Although I am aware that background is crucial to the development of the plot) and focused more on the current situation and the emotions.
Da and I wanted Zeke to be Christian Bale look-alike but Chiara says Christian looks like a ferret even if he's absolutely not.
Uhm...Zeke and Cy weren't together when Az and Cy slept together...
Cy was all confused and wondering if Zeke was worth all the pain and Az decided to help him figure things out...uhm...in his own special way?
Sorry, I would've told you but I told Mech and thought Dada would tell you and and and it's nothing you can't fix in a jiffy! You can just change the “Get back together with Cy.” to... Go after Cy and screw him senseless or something...! SORRY! ::runs away::
And Az doesn’t give a shit about Cy ...ouch... T_T Poor bebeh.
I like it. I really do. But I should have saved you all the trouble and actually told you the crap me and Dada came up with while I was holed up by my lonesome in Camiguin...sorry gyud au!
It was connotative bah, you weirdo. They weren't together together per se, but they might as well be cause really, wala may indication Zeke and Cy slept together--it was how Damien interpreted it as something like--ooh lala, Cy and Zeke are the ultimate OTP even if they don't know it yet. O_O
Amao man ka, i like them baya. Am planning to write more of CyxZeke you bizatch. They're interesting lagi, mas fucked up mana cla Damien ug Az kay walay ma abtan. Ekekekek!
Oi, volcano pizza later? We're going to feed ourselves dead!
We're opening this comm for the First Class Ticket and I know it's going to be mighty boring but we're going to put up threads for character memes so do you want in?
A hundred words = drabble. It's her writing style so it's her call, not mine. Lol. Maybe you should tell her yourself, egit.
Yeah, I really don't like it if people start feminizing boys--I mean, granted, I think I do that sometimes but really, I don't think my son's that much of a fag (I mean, he rarely cries, he's doesn't wear dresses, he just likes to take it up the ass).
Ummm, I love Zeke--period.
Anyway, WATCH SLEEPERS! IT'S TEH EFFING GREATEST MOVIE OF THE CENTURY!!!!!!! It's a semi-old movie with Brad Pitt but really, it's great.
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It could use a bit more work on the technical side, but the flow of this one was well-executed. You were able to show how Zeke and Cy's relationship (also Damien's regard for Az) was like through the dialogue. Zeke seems like love. XD
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Yeah the flow was meant to be short and concise and not at all revealing
because I wanted to experiment with the obscure and concealed writing style wherein it didn't showcase much exposition (Although I am aware that background is crucial to the development of the plot) and focused more on the current situation and the emotions.
Da and I wanted Zeke to be Christian Bale look-alike but Chiara says Christian looks like a ferret even if he's absolutely not.
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Uhm...Zeke and Cy weren't together when Az and Cy slept together...
Cy was all confused and wondering if Zeke was worth all the pain and Az decided to help him figure things out...uhm...in his own special way?
Sorry, I would've told you but I told Mech and thought Dada would tell you and and and it's nothing you can't fix in a jiffy! You can just change the “Get back together with Cy.” to... Go after Cy and screw him senseless or something...! SORRY! ::runs away::
And Az doesn’t give a shit about Cy ...ouch... T_T Poor bebeh.
I like it. I really do. But I should have saved you all the trouble and actually told you the crap me and Dada came up with while I was holed up by my lonesome in Camiguin...sorry gyud au!
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It was connotative bah, you weirdo. They weren't together together per se, but they might as well be cause really, wala may indication Zeke and Cy slept together--it was how Damien interpreted it as something like--ooh lala, Cy and Zeke are the ultimate OTP even if they don't know it yet. O_O
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bilat man na sila oi. like i said, para nako they're as interestng as an upturned rock.
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Oi, volcano pizza later? We're going to feed ourselves dead!
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We're opening this comm for the First Class Ticket and I know it's going to be mighty boring but we're going to put up threads for character memes so do you want in?
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I luv Damien for putting some SENSE into Zeke's head .
And damnit how can he treat Cy like some piece of CONDOM! And trade him for what? An EFFIN GIRL?!
And this just shows that all our kids are stupid period.
Is this enuf dah-ling? :P
and btw i luv chinkah's shit you shud add it to the story only please make her write it longer than a hundred words? :D
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Yeah, I really don't like it if people start feminizing boys--I mean, granted, I think I do that sometimes but really, I don't think my son's that much of a fag (I mean, he rarely cries, he's doesn't wear dresses, he just likes to take it up the ass).
Ummm, I love Zeke--period.
Anyway, WATCH SLEEPERS! IT'S TEH EFFING GREATEST MOVIE OF THE CENTURY!!!!!!! It's a semi-old movie with Brad Pitt but really, it's great.
Too great.
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LOL.
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YOU BITCH! Y THE FUCK DID YOU HANG UP ON ME!
and btw...mech aint gonna be wit us til june so ang laag na complete ta wud be in june...
i'm still not sure wen mi ad2 beach but i'll tell u guys ugma sure :D byeeeeeeeee
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