Misplaced Memories - Chapter 9/10

Aug 07, 2013 12:27

Fragments of what must have been the past few days flickered around in his brain: fake Healer, tea, pain, thrashing, compressors that blocked magic... Suddenly, reason for the restraints surfaced, and his heart thundered while his mind caught up. He frantically looked around the room and laughed unexpectedly when his eyes landed on a mural of ( Read more... )

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piglet76 August 19 2013, 21:01:45 UTC
OH bloody hell this was incredibly believably emotional. It's like you knifed open that moment in a relationship where everything hangs in the balance and put it all on show. Dracos vulnerability and quiet desperation are so sad. It's wonderful how you weaves the complexities of all their experiences together so they are still together, but only just. Very realistic. Amazing work. Must have been exhausting to write!

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dacro August 19 2013, 23:07:27 UTC
I hope that part wasn't too painful for you. Hugs. I confess there were quite a few moments where my heart ached as I typed, and I did cry when Draco had to remove himself from Harry's room at the end of chapter 5, I believe. I knew I wouldn't leave them there, so that made a big difference. ;)

Thank you so much for your comments!

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piglet76 August 20 2013, 06:45:38 UTC
I confess I did sob - but in a good way!

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dacro August 21 2013, 03:29:47 UTC
*hugs*

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tsuj September 8 2013, 19:13:55 UTC
Oh no! Only one chapter left. :(

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