Halfwits (House/Wilson, R)

Mar 09, 2007 15:32


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paraserpiente March 9 2007, 09:11:21 UTC
*grins* It is way too late, and the thing that struck me most was the clinical trial comment.

Wilson: House's anti-drug.

Yussss. :D

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daasgrrl March 9 2007, 09:41:42 UTC
It's worth a try, anyway. Thanks for reading! :)

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erin_giles March 9 2007, 10:14:55 UTC
*giggles*

"'Master' would be nice."

"Don't push it."

I loved it!! And the lack of House/Wilson interaction since House got shot has been bugging me too!

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daasgrrl March 10 2007, 04:51:33 UTC
I think we all miss the 'old' House/Wilson just a little bit. Sigh. Thanks for the feedback! :)

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earlwyn March 9 2007, 10:36:57 UTC
[Re-posted for errors.]

Exceedingly lovely. Best post-ep I've read yet. It's like a soothing balm for the injured soul. Or something less cheesy.

I love that you go through and entail as to why Wilson kept his low profile, as well as the fact that not everything is resolved easily/quickly by House simply showing up for pizza. They have to work to make things right. Very true to life.

Wonderful use of the music metaphor. It ties into the ep nicely but also is a great way of further describing House and Wilson's relationship. And how they made wonderful music together.

House's comment -- Very good. One down, three to go. -- made me squeal outloud. So very happy-making.

I think the hug was my favourite part. Something intensely intimate and intensely gratifying about it. Even more so than the kissing, etc. No one pays attention to how wonderful hugs can be.

One nitpick -- He had thought he could rely on Wilson have his back against Tritter -- think you're missing a "to" there.

But lovely, lovely, lovely. *mems*

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daasgrrl March 10 2007, 04:56:09 UTC
Thanks for the nitpick! Have fixed :)

I'm glad you liked the hug, and also the music thing - I was a little nervous about trying to work that in without making it too, well, sounds of violins XD

I love your icon too. Those were the days. Thanks for the lovely comment, and the mem :)

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earlwyn March 10 2007, 05:46:25 UTC
Hah hah -- no, it didn't even begin to approach the dramatic swelling of violin music. Nothing quite that cloying and saccharine. Just touching and perfect.

Those were the days. *sighs wistfully*

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anonymous March 9 2007, 10:43:01 UTC
Loved the "voices". It was like I was hearing the soundtrack of a "real" episode playing in my head. Well done!

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daasgrrl March 10 2007, 04:58:34 UTC
Thanks! Especially since it was a post-ep, I appreciate that you thought so :)

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petriepuss March 9 2007, 10:43:07 UTC
You are the best!

This is exactly what happened afterwards *nod*.

Love the hug and the one done, three to go thing. Great idea. Also the explaination of Wilson knowing the X-ray seemed very plaucible. Well done!

The season three is very hard on our boys, and I love how you use music to describe the something between two of them.

*copied to harddrive*

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daasgrrl March 10 2007, 05:00:28 UTC
I was slightly annoyed myself after the episode - I was all "Where's Wilson?" about it too XD

Very glad you liked the explanation, and the music. I couldn't get over how gorgeous House is playing the piano ;)

Thanks!

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