Comments | cynicalpirate: There are no words.

cynicalpirate

There are no words.

Jul 01, 2008 20:57

Title: “A little less conversation-”
Rating: R
Summary: A love-story with no dialogue.

Truth is in things, not in words.
-Herman Melville

But words - words are not enough!
Klaus Kinski

Don't speak/I know just what you're saying/So please stop explaining
-No Doubt

( A kiss is a lovely trick designed by nature to stop speech when words become superfluous. )

one-shot, remus/sirius, fic

Comments 47

tourdefierce July 1 2008, 20:51:37 UTC

This is delightful.
I LOVE IT.

It's raw and realistic, the language between them.

Thanks for sharing. It's great.

cynicalpirate July 1 2008, 22:28:13 UTC

Thank you very much. *is pleased* Glad you liked.

isthi July 1 2008, 21:10:30 UTC

WONDERFUL!

Every scene is so strong - dormitory, Shack, common room, bathroom, and I also liked that one without them, that we don't need their words, yours alone work just fine.

Thank you.

cynicalpirate July 1 2008, 22:29:34 UTC

I couldn't leave James and Peter out - they are brilliant in their own right.

♥ Merci.

spacefragments July 1 2008, 21:25:20 UTC

oh, man, i love sections 1 and 3. wonderful. :]

cynicalpirate July 1 2008, 22:30:30 UTC

Those were two very nice bits to write. :D
Thanks.

rev02a July 1 2008, 21:33:01 UTC

"Right then."

Haha. I always feel that same way after posting something.
I really like this... I love that your vignettes pick up at such interesting points in the action; I really love the one with James & Peter being completely obvious to what is going on with the Moony-Pad non-verbals.

cynicalpirate July 2 2008, 07:19:49 UTC

Haha, yeah. It's just like: oohkay. Moving on.

*hugs James and Peter* Thanks.

secretsolitaire July 1 2008, 22:07:09 UTC

Ooh, this is wonderful. "I'm tired" made me melt.

Also, I think "girl's blouse" is my favorite insult ever.

cynicalpirate July 2 2008, 07:20:32 UTC

Thank you.

It is rather charming, isn't it?