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cynicalpirate

Ant Orgy makes a comeback!

Jul 25, 2006 18:11

title: gillian trelawney and her weird and wonderful weather forecast, chapter 2
rating: PG-13
pairing and other things you should know: remus/sirius, smoking!remus, no ants were harmed in the writing of this fic
previous parts: part one
dedication: to dsbs, aplogies and love.

( Sirius reads the right sort of magazines. )

fic

Comments 9

penguin88 July 26 2006, 02:13:02 UTC

Remus picked the pack of Marlboros on his nightstand, fantasizing briefly about laying them down in a line between him and Sirius, igniting them, and creating a Protective Barrier of Fire.

I love neurotic Remus - ever so much! He reminds me, in a horrible silly way, of myself and my poor brain that over-thinks every stupid occurence or utterance but I'm not out of my mind, really. Sirius is wonderful as the vision of temptation *snicker* and the perfect juxtaposition to everything that is right and good in Remus' world. Remus' thoughts are wonderful and meticulous.

I'm also enjoying the little side notes - very much so :). They give a nice inner look into the nervous breakdown world that is Remus Lupin. He really is a perfect candidate for a chain smoker, isn't he? Poor Remus. Life is so hard when you're the sane one ( ... )

penguin88 July 26 2006, 02:15:41 UTC

Oh and a quick side note -

Did you know that you spelled apologies as 'aplogies'?

cynicalpirate August 12 2006, 08:37:26 UTC

*JEDI MIND TRICK*

You will have no memory whatsoever of this conversation.

cynicalpirate August 12 2006, 08:30:41 UTC

Lol, I'm glad you love him. And I'm sure you're not out of your mind... and neither is he... *looks shifty*

I do that a lot too - overthink. It would be so blurry easy not to obsess over things, but I do anyway. *kicks self. And Remus*

You always give a gritty look at what it is to be a regular teen-aged boy with little to no conception of personal space or hygiene
HUZZAH, is all I can say to that. *grin*

Thanks for commenting.

expositionary August 23 2006, 18:25:49 UTC

Went away on vacation without internet for awhile. (*sobs*) Came back, started getting caught up on f-list reading, and found this, which made me grin. And then I found the third part, which made me grin even more.

I love UST like you wouldn't believe, and yours. Makes my head explode. I mean, lying in bed with no clothes on and banter? How much better could it possibly GET?

And then, of course, you have to go and give us that ever-so-frustrating last line, so I'm off to the next part straightaway.

* A nice, beige sort of place with a nice breeze and a view of the sea and a decent library and drinks cabinet and digestive biscuits on tap and no-one around for miles but maybe perhaps an owl so that he could still get the paper and keep in touch and things.

Remus' Happy Place sounds like my Happy Place. And your little insertions such as these are lovely things. :)

cynicalpirate August 24 2006, 01:41:55 UTC

Agh, internetless holidays. I know them well. *sympathises*

Lol, I think I pushed the limits a bit there. Still, I got them both naked and in a bed, and yay, the UST is still unresolved! Hurrah!

Thank you! Glad you're liking the fic.

dsbs September 2 2006, 01:14:27 UTC

*In the split second of rifling through his mental filing cabinets for an answer as to what could possibly be lying on his feet, Remus had remembered his cousin Joey (three years older) who had what Auntie Enid called an Imagination, and what Remus called Sadism. Having discovered that Remus had recently encountered a real life werewolf, Joey had attempted to get over his jealousy by instilling his cousin with a healthy fear of several other Dark creatures, which were much more impressive (although also much more fictional), and all more than liable to bite young boys' toes while they slept.

Bah. Best. Footnote. Ever.

Also

Remus picked the pack of Marlboros on his nightstand, fantasizing briefly about laying them down in a line between him and Sirius, igniting them, and creating a Protective Barrier of Fire.

Have I mentioned lately that I adore you? No? Well, then.

Oh yes, and just to be a bit of a kill-joy:
And they didn't usually stoop to 'your mother' jokes, not that he was still paying attention to anything that was going on ( ... )

cynicalpirate September 4 2006, 16:06:41 UTC

I like footnotes! There's a tag that makes them REAL footnotes, with an actual link to the bottom of the page, but I don't know it. Regrettably. I'd sell my soul for that tag...

HURRAH for joy-killing. *fixes*

♥

tundraeternal May 13 2007, 19:24:53 UTC

ARGH! You're never going to finish this, are you? Life is tragic!