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[cynassa]

"There's got to be some somewhere," she says aloud. Stupid lump, she thinks affectionately, it's an ancient model made at least three hundred years ago. Sometime in the fifty-first century. There are loads of better, faster models around. Ones that don't need extra parts made of metal! Metal, honestly

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[starphoenix9241]

There was a gap between me reading the summary for this and actually reading it so when I read, "three hundred years ago", I thought, "typical teenage exaggeration" [I pictured her as a teenager throughout the whole thing, I guess because of the affiliation between crappy old car and young people], then I read "sometime in the fifty first century" and realised it was a futuristic piece. Haha, >.<

Anyway, this made me laugh ^_^ It's a cute slice of life that paints Jesse as a normal person but insinuates more in her life [If she can't get the piece in the legit way, she has absolutely no problem with just stealing it]. And the relationship with the car reminds me of mine with my crappy car.

I think this: It wasn't the first time pillow talk had been useful was my favourite line. I picture Lily as the more calm brainy type and Jessie as an impatient, hands on girl.

[cynassa]

She's 22 actually, but if you consider the longer life span at the time, Jesse pretty much is a teenager. Lily is...complicated.

It's a cute slice of life that paints Jesse as a normal person but insinuates more in her life

Yay! That's exactly how I meant it to be.

Thanks so much for reviewing, your comment's actually helped a lot. It's put a bit of focus on what I need to work out about this universe.