John/Keith Oneshot is FINALLY here

[cutothechase]

And NOOWWWWW for the stupid fic you've all been waiting for! XD cross-posted to who_slash
My internet's been down for the past 2 days and school's been shitty, if those are enough excuses : S

Title:  Movie Night
Pairing: Jeith
Rating:  R  to be safe
Wordcount:  940
Warnings: allusions to Brokeback Mountain's naughtier scenes, kissing, talk of horniness (oh

Comments

[whtevrhpnd2mary]

I like the little additions you made, and it definitely works well from Moon's POV. Well done. I hope there will be more soon. ;)

BTW- I've begun posting on Pete's bio, if you're interested. :D

[cutothechase]

Thanks! :D Your suggestions really helped me, can't thank you enough :)

And yayy! I'll totally check that out once I'm done with all this work. I'm actually not even supposed to be online atm but don't tell XD

And OMG YOUR ICON IS LOVE <3

[hippiechic1967]

that. was. FANTASTIC!!
well worth the small wait. ;)

i like how you used a POV, and the real life film to get them going. again, fantastic.

[cutothechase]

Wow, thank you so much! :D

I was a little nervous at first about the POV, but I thought it just flowed better. Though I'm such a hypocrit cuz I usually tend to hate 1st person fics. XD I'm so glad you liked it though! :D <3

That's all the Jeith I have in me for now, but I'm sure more is just around the corner :)

[hippiechic1967]

you're welcome!

i started POV, and i never went back. ;)

hay, you've got me jeith than i do!! :D