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Song in Red & Gray: Chapter 21

Oct 18, 2007 03:18

Title: Song in Red & Gray-Chapter 21: Drugs
Author: ophelivia
Rating: R-NC17
Word Count: 2,030
Pairing: Beckett/OC
Characters: Rose, James and special cameos by MURTOGG & MULLROY!
Summary: "Do just what I tell you and no one will get hurt." A series of vignettes spanning both films.
Status: In-Progress
Disclaimer: I don't own the Pirates characters. ( Read more... )

murtogg, james norrington, lord cutler beckett, author: ophelivia, beckett/original, original character, mullroy

Comments 21

lizzie_sparrow October 18 2007, 11:08:50 UTC

He's still wearing the bloody collar! Oh, James, my poor sweet James...

*small whimper*

And poor Rose! Ah, she needs help, and James is perfect.

I'm loving this so much. Great to see a chapter before I head off to school. =]

ophelivia October 18 2007, 17:25:02 UTC

I know I'm so terribly cruel to him aren't I? ::sighs:: Glad you liked, I couldn't wait to see what you thought

lizzie_sparrow October 18 2007, 23:07:34 UTC

Aw!

Well, know that I always think it is good. =]

demonicsymphony October 18 2007, 11:30:21 UTC

EEEE

-clings to you and your story-
lovelovelovelove

ophelivia October 18 2007, 17:25:37 UTC

::giant hug:: You're so awesome, and that avatar is love

demonicsymphony October 18 2007, 17:43:19 UTC

hehe ty very much honey!

I love yours too.

-swoons over the dear Lord-

pink_siamese October 18 2007, 19:01:48 UTC

This is well on its way to brilliant. Love the use of the Irish Gaelic and the introduction of Murtogg and Mullroy.

Fav line: Skeleton in a fine topcoat. It distills Norrington's evolution down to five words. Pure excellence.

I like the use of interaction between Rose and Norrington as a mirror; in watching them together, we are seeing bits of Beckett reflected, both new facets and old ones cast in fresh light. Lovely.

I'll be sad when this fic is finished. I so look forward to reading new chapters. It's very literary, something you don't get much of in fanfiction.

ophelivia October 18 2007, 21:49:56 UTC

I can always count on you to mention the lines I am most proud of. Don't worry, the fic won't be finished for quite some time. I'd like to try and use every prompt and I've got ::counts:: sixty five more to go. Then maybe I'll do some stragiht Beckington (oxymoron...) and I have a Norribeth chapterfic planned as well

pink_siamese October 18 2007, 22:12:04 UTC

My brain is fried right now. I would utter something pithier, but alas I am reduced to this:

Sexy.

ariei_delmonte October 19 2007, 05:01:33 UTC

WHAT? *is sad cause they didn't get together* Awesome chapter though. Rose's way of thinking is awesome. Can't wait for more.

ophelivia October 19 2007, 07:48:17 UTC

I know, I know, evil cliffhanger of doom. But never fear, their time will come. Rose just has to wise up

spookyfbi October 19 2007, 07:16:01 UTC

Wow, this is getting really interesting!

>>Making love to him will stop my heart, but I covet what he does to me. He will kill me but I need what he does to me!<<

God, how is it that Beckett can have such power over people? Kind of creepy in a way that James & Rose are getting in so deep. Can't wait to read more!

ophelivia October 19 2007, 07:49:21 UTC

He's Beckett, I ask no questions about his power. So glad you like. Update soon please!

spookyfbi October 19 2007, 07:55:45 UTC

He has this power over us, I suppose it makes sense he'd have that power over them.

>>Update soon please!<<
What, mine? I've written some of the next chapter. There's some grinding going on, but they're still fully clothed. C'mon boys, lose the breeches and get to it! :P