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[curtusky]

Title: A Ghost from the Past Reborn.
Chapter: One
Previous Chapters: intro
Author: Curtusky
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU fantasy
Character(s): SHINee, Girls' Generations(SNSD)[Taeyeon, Seohyun, Jessica, Tiffany, Yoona, Sooyoung]
Author's Note: Greatly inspired by the Suikoden series but prominently Suikoden V. Looking for criticism. Proof-read, but not

Comments

I LIKE THIS!

[mandywheeler]

yo. OMG I LOVE THIS, but i do have some things to point out. prz don't hate. :D. they are as follows:

1. phrases like this: who is more affectionately known as 'Prince Key'. it should be "was" since you're writing in past tense. :3 i think it happened a few times but i have only had a cup of coffee today so @__@. :D

umm and then just some commas where not needed and maybe a few spelling corrections and it'll be nicely cleaned up.

Re: I LIKE THIS!

[curtusky]

"OMG I LOVE THIS"
Yay Yay and Yay

"prz don't hate."
I asked for critiquing, did I not? XD

I'll go through right now and change those 'is's, and analyze the commas. THANK YOU SO MUCH. <3

[alohaaa]

It's actually pretty good~

[curtusky]

You had doubts?!

[alohaaa]

lol of course, why not? =P