Comments | cupcakebean: Day One: a Bones fanfic

cupcakebean

Day One: a Bones fanfic

May 21, 2010 21:29

( It’s Day One and she’s up to her elbows in dirt and death. )

b&b, fanfic, bones

Comments 45

fourth_rose May 22 2010, 05:51:32 UTC

I love the parallel structures - great idea, and wonderfully executed!

cupcakebean May 26 2010, 15:07:58 UTC

Thank you!

tempertemper May 22 2010, 06:51:01 UTC

Love the reflection between their two experiences. Guh.

♥

cupcakebean May 26 2010, 15:08:48 UTC

Thanks, dearie! ♥

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cupcakebean May 26 2010, 15:09:16 UTC

Thanks, hun!

vinniebolzano May 22 2010, 12:20:37 UTC

O My God! That was absolutely incredible. I saw the episode yesterday and have read countless fics but this one was gorgeous, simply amazing. Thank you for sharing that.

cupcakebean May 26 2010, 15:14:38 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

sheytune May 22 2010, 12:47:44 UTC

And the very idea that she might be holding him back… It’s unbearable. He needs to move on; he’d said so himself. - I think this is a big part of why she told herself it was OK to go.

I love the parallels between the two of them, and the recognition of how the other has changed them.

cupcakebean May 26 2010, 15:22:48 UTC

I think this is a big part of why she told herself it was OK to go.

I definitely think that's what made her finally decide to go. She was obviously very torn up about it, but once again, she put Booth's well-being above her own. That's beautifully heartbreaking, isn't it?

Thanks for reading and leaving such a nice comment. =)