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Standing Still (20/?)

Apr 06, 2011 19:36

Title: Standing Still (20/?)
Author: CSIGeekFan
Rating: R (Language)
Genre: Drama/Angst
Summary:It's been five years since that fateful day that he walked away from Oakdale. Five years since he had his heart ripped to shreds. Five years since the ultimate betrayal.

A/N: The aftermath of the accident follows. I want to take a moment to thank everyone ( Read more... )

luke, lure, fanfic

Comments 13

joann414 April 7 2011, 22:34:24 UTC

That is the only decent breath that I have taken about reid's death is when u wrote Luke hitting Chris. YAH!!!!!!!

csigeekfan April 9 2011, 23:33:51 UTC

lol. I felt Chris needed a good punching, although I've never outright hated him. I just thought him overly entitled.

rtruffles April 8 2011, 15:27:42 UTC

I'm glad that Ash punched Chris! Chris was just such a thoughtless moron on the show. You have captured that quality perfectly here.

I chuckled when I read the line about an annoyed wife. I wonder who she's mad at, Chris or Ash. LOL

I'm so glad that Jason is going to be okay.

I love the strong connection between Ash, Lanie, Carl and Jason.

Great job!

csigeekfan April 9 2011, 23:35:48 UTC

I can't imagine Luke not developing a family, even if it's different than the one from which he came. While the people may not be refined, and while they may have had to work for every crumb they've gotten, I tend to think of Ash's 'family' as something he would've made because it's who he is.

I'm glad you liked the scene where he punched Chris. :)