Comments | csigeekfan: Standing Still 18/?

csigeekfan

Standing Still 18/?

Mar 20, 2011 23:58

Title: Standing Still (18/?)
Author: CSIGeekFan
Rating: R (Language)
Genre: Drama/Angst
Summary: It's been five years since that fateful day that he walked away from Oakdale. Five years since he had his heart ripped to shreds. Five years since the ultimate betrayal.

A/N: I want to thank everyone who has commented. I'm thrilled that so many have been ( Read more... )

luke, lure, reid, fanfic

Comments 16

f3d0ragirl March 21 2011, 11:53:32 UTC

Fucking chris.....

csigeekfan March 29 2011, 03:34:42 UTC

Yeah.... you have no idea how I've struggled how Luke will handle Chris.

dpracket March 21 2011, 11:58:36 UTC

Just read all the chapters. Good story, even with the absence of my favorite part of LuRe.

Oh no...Ash does't need to see Chris. :(

csigeekfan March 29 2011, 03:36:23 UTC

Thank you for the lovely comment. I've struggled with how I want Ash to react to Chris. I knew the general flow, but I waffled back and forth quite a bit.

gypsiesheart March 21 2011, 14:01:32 UTC

I hope that Luke hugs Katie and Jacob and then hit Chris over the head with his cane...or shakes his hand and then punches him in the jaw!!!

csigeekfan March 29 2011, 03:37:14 UTC

lol. I can imagine that scene in my head. Katie! Jacob! You look wonderful. Give me a hug Chris! *SMACK* ;)

jem_018 March 21 2011, 16:56:12 UTC

Oh no... *gasps*

csigeekfan March 29 2011, 03:38:33 UTC

Nice cliffy, huh? ;-)

rlb_16 March 21 2011, 17:11:18 UTC

Oh, not good, not good! Chris go home.
I loved that little moment where Ash and Aaron hug as Holden watches with such emotion! Awesome Scene in my mind!!!!
Great Chapter.

csigeekfan March 29 2011, 03:39:31 UTC

I've dreaded writing the scene with Chris from the beginning of the story - trying to imagine Ash's reaction.