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[csi_n1fan]

Title: Mirror, mirror on the wall
Author: Stardusty
Rating: G
Author's Note: Okay, so like I explained, this is way harder than I thought, but double the fun than writing a long story. Short stories need a lot of cutting and editing, before you can say you're happy with it. And I enjoy doing so! The prompt was a nice one, many things you can do

Comments

[chatonelle]

Eeepp!! Poor Susan, haunted by his memory and her choice forever. T_T

[csi_n1fan]

Yeah, indeed! I had a choice to make when I began writing. I did have something more fluf in mind, but as I wrote on, I realised I had to stick to Angst to make it work.. I bear with Susan on this one, must be tough for her... *gets teary eyes*

[kitoky]

ARGH. There's too many angsty - time fics. [cries]
I like the criticism of time just when she comes out of Narnia however terribly sad it is.

[csi_n1fan]

I agree with you. Next weeks challenge, I'm hoping for a prompt out of which I can make a fluf one! Yeah, time is mocking her, and there is nothing she can do about it! Weheh, I want to go over there and tell her it's okay, and then bring her back to Caspian the Handsome... Yep, like that's ever going to happen *sighs deeply*
Let's cross our fingers for a prompt next week that can make us all happyyy! ^^

[muselives]

Aw, sad. I just really liked the line "Time mocked her," I dunno, it really summed up the feel of the piece. Good work!

[csi_n1fan]

Thank you very very much, I do appreciate that:)