Fic: The road of Destiny (7/?)f

[crystal_mk]

Another two weeks had come and gone since I had been left alone.  Two weeks since Matthew had finally had enough of my games and left, taking our daughter with him.  Two weeks since I heard Molly’s cartoons in the morning and smelled her bubble gum scented shampoo when I took a shower.  Two weeks since I heard her laughter and felt her tight

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[boymommytotwo]

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Then his arms were around me and his voice was in my ear, whispering endearments into my hair. My arms went around his neck, holding on tight and pressing my face into the curve of his shoulder. I breathed in his cherished scent, taking the gulping breaths of a man who just spent fourteen days drowning. He kissed my ear, my neck my jaw, my eyelids, soft, fluttering kisses that had me nearly in tears.
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:me: :tears: that's b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l...

ok... what about:

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“When this is over, you are going to take a vacation Mohinder. I don’t care where you go, just make sure it’s warm and a far away from here as possible.”
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is it intentional that matthew is sending him away on vacation by himself? why didn't matt say "we", "we're going to take a vacation and get as far away as possible..."???

do love this series... you're telling a great story.
-a

[crystal_mk]

Aww! *tissues and hugs*

All I can say is everything in and about the story has a reason and purpose behind it, some of which you might not expect.

I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for reading!

[00smut]

Wow, that daydream stage of unreality when someone moves out is spot on. Mohinder runs the gauntlet in this chapter, everything is building up. Poor Elle <3 This rocks.

[crystal_mk]

I wasn't sure how that whole part would turn out but I'm happy with what I ended up with and I'm glad you think it works.

Part of why I love writing this series is because it's all from Mohinder's POV. Everything heard and seen and felt is his and even though it's so much harder to write first-person POV, I feel you get more of a connection with the character. Done with the rambling.

Thanks for reading!

[carmexgirl]

Oh this was lovely! The point where Matt steps in and says "He won't be facing Sylar alone" had me jumping up and down with joy! Mohinder really has been through the ringer emotionally in this one -I really do hope he gets a holiday at the end, otherwise he may just explode with the pressure of trying to keep Matt, Bennet and Bob happy, while trying to find a way to kill Sylar. They'd better appreciate him!

[crystal_mk]

Well I'm sure that Matt appreciates him and Bob is learning to. Not so sure about Bennet though.

Thanks for reading!

[boudecia7]

Yay, Matt came back! I'm so excited :) I love the warmth and love between them in this story...it makes me happy even when Mohinder is getting himself into trouble!

I wondered about the vacation line, too, though...what sort of vacation is it going to be if Matt's not there to have lots and lots of makeup sex with? ;D

[crystal_mk]

I couldn't not have Matt come back! That would be an awful story.

LOL, you make a very good argument. Unfortunately, I can't say anything, mostly because I'm not even sure what's going to happen.

Thanks for reading!

[hanuueshe]

Oh... I have such a sense of foreboding about this! You can see all the little hints about where this is headed, and how dark that eventuality will be, and teeny, tiny, almost invisible hints about what Bennett is planning for them. I wonder about Elle's death; could Bennett have orchestrated that?

This really has me on tenderhooks. Despite Mohinder's decided unsuaveness, this really does read like a spy-thriller. Only, almost from the POV of the spy's sidekick, because if anyone is the spy, it's Bennett.

[crystal_mk]

Dun dun dundun dun dun dundun dun da daaaaa dun da daaaaa! *insert Tom Cruise here*

I can't say anything but uh, can you tell *me* where it's heading. Seriously, I have no idea now. I though I knew what I wanted but it keeps changing!

Thanks for reading!

[hanuueshe]

I totally know what you mean. I mean, when I started with m yown film noir epic, I was thinking it would be straight up Molly vs. Sylar, with some M3 on the side to lighten things up. And then Elle came in and was all like "Where's my part?", and Bennett was like "I'm pretty comfortable with morally grey." and Claire's like "Um, hello? There's a good reason for that! Somewhat, anyway", then Audrey just swooped out of nowhere and Angela keeps trying to give Molly advice and Peter just sort of randomly beamed himself in, and you can't have Peter without Nathan, and then suddenly *everybody* wants to join in the party and even West and Maya convinced me to give them cameos and I'm just like WTF? What happened to my story! It went all ensamble on me

[crystal_mk]

Haha, when I went into this I knew exactly what I wanted and how I wanted to get there but then Bennet was all like "wouldn't this be more dramatic" and Matt was like "that so doesn't work for me" and it all just went crazy.

I'm trying to keep a hold of my ending but the story just keeps wanting to change! Oh well, I'll just have to try harder. Thanks for the advice.