Comments | cryogenia: Cryo loses her mind

cryogenia

Cryo loses her mind - Scar/Ed

Jan 07, 2005 13:50

Because I can't have anax's babies, I had to do something even more drastic to prove that I love him. (I hope your beta still wants this pairing, cause lord knows no one else does :D )

( Scar x Ed, NC-17 )

scar/ed, fanfic, smut

Comments 21

herongale January 8 2005, 00:39:51 UTC

I owe you more then babies. God, I can't even begin to figure how I can repay you, but... God. I love it.

I know that I am probably the only person in the universe who loves this pairing, and the main reason I love it is that I keep having these compelling dreams about it. I cannot explain the affiliation either! But rest assured, I am writing my own epic porn right now. Someday I might even post it somewhere.

Anyway! You are awesome and I love you. I have friended you and despite what anax has to say, I love FMA and will now happily read many fanfics in this realm. Yea, even those of the squicky (for me) Elricest variety.

nilyveth January 8 2005, 14:10:01 UTC

Woah. Heh. Well. Somehow, I could see that. I didn't like Scar when he was still alive and I still do not like him now, but somehow... yes, I could see it. They've got quite the potential. So, I guess I would've stumbled upon a Scar/Ed someday, and I'm glad that now, it was yours. Really cool story, I Loved.

And can I please see teh Elricest underneath~? Pretty please?

cryogenia January 10 2005, 04:02:04 UTC

Yes, you may see Elricest underneath. It's not necessary to make the fic work since the fic doesn't REALLY work anyways, but if it makes you feel better you may certainly do so ^^

:D

engine_blue February 12 2006, 03:11:22 UTC

Yay, sex! Scar/ed's fine, when done right. Agree with grammar issues of other people... That one "tense" spot hit me too. yay for NOT the easy to find ointment, I've been wondering about those on Lj lately. yup.

Erm...what was I going to say---I was confused about when ever got on his back. I got the Niisan thing. And, were all those references of 'this andd that' talking about holding ed down so he wouldn't run away / lash out? @.o I think they are...I think I get it . (I think i can, I think I can--!)

cryogenia February 12 2006, 06:24:27 UTC

Hey-

Thanks for the kind comment :) FYI, tense issues arose from my poor brain fighting the pairing so hard I literally couldn't figure out wtf I was doing XD And I wasn't happy with this sucker, so I ended up writing a much different version later, when I gave up and liked Scar/Ed :D That fic is here, for the record.

So will this fic ever get edited? Probably not, cause I like Hierophant so much better XD;

engine_blue February 12 2006, 17:57:40 UTC

yep, I'm going to go read that one; I just fell asleep last night before I could. xP

yeah...and I meant, "when ED got on his back"...my brain failed me. >>

cleoius July 7 2006, 00:38:21 UTC

*Happy sigh* That was an interesting and fun read. Quite different from Hierophant but I can see the basis for what you would develop into that one. Hierophant gave me the idea that Ed was really more a captive of Scar, here not so much. Sure in some ways he still is, but in this one it seems more like he is reluctantly working with him. Perhaps cause he was much more active here, than in the other one. But both stories give me the feeling if he wanted to leave, he really couldn't with his automail malfunctioning!

The nisan references are due to Al being sucked into the philosopher's stone? Is he playing with Ed, you know lying to make him think Al is somewhere in him, or is it for real? But also, when he's thinking about Ed's skin getting darker, and his hair started to lighten to match his, I can't help but think maybe Scar is looking to make him a replacement for the brother he lost!