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cryogenia

[Fic] A History of Violence, Chapter 6

Mar 09, 2006 20:04

...could it BE?! Why yes, yes it is! :D

Title: A History of Violence
Author: cryogenia
Rating: R for language and violence
Genre: Gen, drama, prisonfic

( AHoV Chapter 6 )

fanfic, elric brothers, prison fic, gen

Comments 33

r_enoah March 10 2006, 04:51:00 UTC

Aww...the perfect blend of fluff and angst. That was touching, really.

Fidgety!Al. ;_;

cryogenia March 10 2006, 07:46:29 UTC

Thank you! I was trying to go for a bit of downtime here, so they get the chance to be fluffy and not just *fighting* all the time...glad it pleased!

sky_dark March 10 2006, 21:07:04 UTC

Brilliant as usual. I love how Al has stepped up to the plate for Ed, Ed needs someone there to help, even if he'd never admit it.

quickthorne March 10 2006, 05:20:00 UTC

“At least that’s something I can have now. The rest of it is pointless.

This... this is just so true to this Ed. This is really how he thinks. That's very... sad, and hopeless. Very bleak.

Good job.

And I love Pushy!Al!

cryogenia March 10 2006, 07:46:51 UTC

Thank you! I love pushy!Al too :) He's so cute and idealistic...

anonymous March 10 2006, 05:37:04 UTC

No -idea- if you need/want/loathe beta-ish-ing, but I found a tiny tiny error.

“I suppose they’re really bringing here (Should be 'her') for the trial,” Alphonse continued. “Brother…what do you know about Winry? How is she involved?”

I am in absolute love with this story though.
So thankful it's being continued... Beautiful writing.

cryogenia March 10 2006, 06:49:58 UTC

Thank you - yeah, this is being continued, now that I'm not constantly emo.

Log in so I can thank you properly though, silly person! :D

tavella March 10 2006, 06:15:13 UTC

And the smile was back in full force, and it tugged at his heart that his brother approved.

“Sure.” Alphonse said, and offered him a hand. “I’m just glad you have something.”

So am I. Edward thought, following wearily along to the bedroom. So am I.

Loves on this. Poor Ed, it's good he has a few quiet moments to recuperate. The storm will break on him again soon enough.

cryogenia March 10 2006, 07:47:20 UTC

Yeah, poor Ed :-/

Thanks for the comment! :D

zrana March 10 2006, 13:50:19 UTC

Yay~! Ed gets some genuine REST finally~!

I love all Ed's thoughts about Al, it's just wonderful. X3

Al's just so driven to get things put RIGHT that he needs it pounded into his head (pounded because, well, he IS an Elric) that Ed's been living the shitty life and just needs some RELIEF first before going off and saving the world!! Go, Super-Brother Powers, GO!!! getting Ed cleared.

*cuddles them both and skitters off to bed*