OMG YES! I thought the fandom had given up on prisonfic. I love the way you portray Ed's reactions to the world outside prison and Super Brother Al - Yes, Love it when he gets protective. Love the comparison between the Ed that was and the Al that is and their similarities. Please don't stop.
It must be so frustrating for Al to see his brother so soul-scarred. For Ed to be there in the flesh, but totally unavailable in the spirit, because he's been so thoroughly damaged by prison that he can't let his gaurd down ever for anyone.
AAAAAH! Found this earlier today...just as I was heading out for work. >=( So I read it really fast, cuz, dude. Your writing is like a drug and I couldn't just walk *away*.
But now I shall read it and savor it and maybe even reread the whole series, just to refresh my memory (ha, ha!).
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I simply adored Al there at the end - from I'll-get-you-anything to pushy,-just-tell-me-what-you-want. It was just so...Al. *grins*
yay for updates! can't wait for more ;)
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But now I shall read it and savor it and maybe even reread the whole series, just to refresh my memory (ha, ha!).
Yay for prison!fic!
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