[fanfic] Breaking Mask

Mar 14, 2010 18:17

Title: Breaking Mask

Pairing: JongKey

Genre: drama. angst. fluff.

Rating: PG-16

Words: 1 948

Warning: none

Summary: You always wanted to be the Almighty Key, the one who is able to accomplish everything and with some sparkle all around. You wanted to be lovely and glittering but not easy to touch.

Thanks to: my beta engbreakfast

Dedicated to: kitkii  ( Read more... )

[jongkey], {shinee}, "breaking mask", *fanfic

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dongbangsuju20 March 14 2010, 17:41:45 UTC
SPOT
for darling kitkii

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kitkii March 14 2010, 20:39:28 UTC
OMGOMGOMGOMG /sobs and clings and goes to read ;;

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dongbangsuju20 March 14 2010, 21:02:11 UTC
*cuddles*
hihi, I hope you'll like it >ö<
(as I said, the other one somehow doesn't want to be finished, idek .---. sorry~~)

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kitkii March 16 2010, 03:53:19 UTC
crying. omg i am so sorry it took me way too long to read this. this is so...so...i can't even express it ;_; the beginning made me break down and cry because i can relate so easily, so so easy. then the end i cried again because lkajlkfjlkjf homfg. i love how its jonghyun that can break past that barrier, how its jong that never gives up and makes him open up and helps him no matter what. i love this, i love it so much.

i can't even describe how this makes me feel. like. it makes me so happy and lkajlkj i dont. i can't. omg belial ;_; i don't deserve this, you're so amazing, how do you even.

ajlkjkjl /clings and snuggles and loves forever and ever. ilyilyily and i could repeat it forever and i can't even. tell you with words how much meaning this has for me and i cant even. find a picture because not even pictures can do so much justice ;~;

i just.aksjflkjkfj thank you. from the bottom of my heart/all of myself, thank you so much for this ;_;♥

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byuldeureul March 14 2010, 19:34:05 UTC

/Sighs happily ♥

Sorry, Belial-bb. *^* I'll be right back to comment properly ONCE I'M DONE SETTING MY MELTED HEART BACK TOGETHER AGAIN. ;;

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dongbangsuju20 March 14 2010, 20:53:21 UTC
I am now in a relationship and I bother everyone with that and I am happy and jhasdhgf *flail* I already miss him sfm .-. and I want to tell someone every little thing, in real life like rambling and talking about him all the time but I don't think anyone want to listen to such a lot and long story and thing and idk XDDD but I am happy <3 and I miss him .-. although it were only two days with him... and he will visit me at saturday ^-^ *flails* sorry, but I just had to say this >ö<

aww <3~
thank you for reading *flail* ♥
(I know that I still have to reply to that comment where you tell me that you would want a 2Min fic >ö< and I wanted to reply that I never wrote 2Min before, but I could try.. also I have no idea about their characters and behaviours, maybe I should read some other 2Min fics beforehand and yeah.. XD'')
I am glad you like it haha XD

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byuldeureul March 14 2010, 22:12:34 UTC

AFlsmsaio;glksd -- you don't have to feel like you're "bothering" anyone with anything, bb!! :O It's so good to hear you got to spend some time together, and I'm extremely happy for you and I do hope that your wishes and longing to be near him will only culminate into happiness, too. :] You absolutely deserve that much at the very least ♥ Hope Saturday turns out well for you, too!

Now. About this fic. /Takes a deep breath

This was...probably one of THE most romantic JongKey pieces I've ever read. AND IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY. ;~; It make me so wonderfully happy for some reason~ Happy for the reciprocated feelings and for Jonghyun and for Kibum and asfljknask.gf they just make me so ridiculously happy, I don't even know what I'm trying to say here ;;

And don't even get me started on how much your writing alone brought the waterworks out in me. ;______; I--just--the way you weave the softest hint of desperation and yearning and hope into your details makes me really feel for these two, you know? *^* I feel what Kibum ( ... )

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dongbangsuju20 March 14 2010, 22:22:13 UTC
all the love from other people and friends make me somehow very happy ;^; *flails* thank you so much <333 your words make me really smile and just add more to my happiness <3 sajdhg thaaank you, i love you and I am so thankful and thank you and I love you ;^; ♥ why are you such a sweetheart!? *clings*

omg haha XDDD
it's okay lol XD
I get what you mean, I think XD ♥

aww, no tears pls >ö<
*cuddles*
shdjhfgfg this to hear makes me really really, like REALLY happy jsykdj
*flattered*
this is one of the best bestest comments I ever got <3 ( ... )

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xxqod March 14 2010, 19:41:38 UTC
So beautiful!
I'm all emotional now *blinks away tears*
I love all the actions in this fic and those spoke actually more than the words in the dialogues, well... I felt it that way.
Really very lovely :)
<3 ~~

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dongbangsuju20 March 14 2010, 20:54:27 UTC
aww, no tears ;^;
*cuddles*

thaank you very much <33~
I was and am never one for much dialogue or thoughts ^^'''
I think that's just my style.. I am glad that you think that it's okay like that XD

thank you ♥

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papersanguine March 23 2010, 05:25:54 UTC
Um...whoa! That was so beautifuL! I love how your characterized Key and Jjong! Perfect!

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dongbangsuju20 March 23 2010, 08:52:45 UTC
thank you so much <3
I am glad you like it ^-^
*flattered*

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louvela April 29 2010, 20:44:48 UTC
Oh my...

Why???? Why did you write so amazing fics??
Well, this one is really beautiful ^^
Thank you so much for write this.
I'm happy to read this and maybe little sad too... but it's a really good fic ^^
See you~

PS : added you as friend ^^

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dongbangsuju20 April 29 2010, 20:53:24 UTC
;^;
omg thank you~~
this makes me so so happy to hear, really, because my writing sucks at the moment so very much x-x and I feel like writing crap and like I can't write anymore and all .-.
so thank you so much ♥
haha, I am so glad you like it <3
you're welcome, thank YOU for reading and writing such a lovely comment <3

thank you thank you ♥ ♥
^-^

yeah, I saw~ x3
sorry I only do selective adding at the moment xx
but thank you <3

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