[fanfic] Beauty

Dec 18, 2009 00:10

Title: Beauty

Pairing: HanChul

Genre: drama. fluff. romance.

Rating: PG-13

Words: 1 216

Warning: unbetad

Summary: 'If I can't be beautiful, I want to be invisible.'

Dedicated to: everkitsune thank you for being my inspiration. thank you for being my friend. thank you for everything. ily ♥

Disclaimer: Don't own Super Junior or HanChul.

A/N:I wrote ( Read more... )

"beauty", {super junior}, [hanchul], *fanfic

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kitkii December 17 2009, 23:24:07 UTC
oh, god. This is so breathtaking, so utterly heartbreaking and yet so much more because its so.

;~~; /can't formulate words.

Your writing is so outstanding, how can you paint pictures so easily in my head? I love the continuation of this:

He still crawls in your bed with cold feet and colder body and tries to warm himself on you and your touches, words and kisses.

Throughout. It's so amazing, so fitting...so so. kljlksj Thank you for writing, so much, thank you always and forever and please never ever ever stop! ♥

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dongbangsuju20 December 17 2009, 23:29:40 UTC
thaaank you ;^;
I am always a bit surprised that you actually think my writing is like that, haha
*flattered*

idk?! ;^;
i didn't know I could do that <33~
I am glad you like my writing, so much ♥

I am also glad you like this story and all <3~
*hugs*
thank you for liking, for being my inspiration, for everything..
I will try to never stop?! <3

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kitkii December 17 2009, 23:36:53 UTC
not like!

love~~~ 爱!

thank you! a billion times thank you forever ;~~~; /tackles ♥ (also, i love the comm layout/header/everythingggg~ <333

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dongbangsuju20 December 17 2009, 23:42:14 UTC
okay okay
*laugh*
THANK YOU <33333
*clings*

I should thank you, so stop thanking me, haha <333
*tackled* ♥
*loves*

really?! aw, thank you <3
glad you like it ^-^

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x_escapism_x December 18 2009, 00:35:52 UTC
Oh man this is just...wow
I love how you write - seriously...it's just so beautiful *o*

I suck at writing comments -o-;;;

I love the picture of Chul like this...so vulnerable and needy with Hannie there to catch him ^o^
It's actually how I roleplay him XD

Not many people write REALLY good HanChul like this
-bows down to-
XD!!

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dongbangsuju20 December 18 2009, 00:39:38 UTC
your comment is pretty great and good for that you say you suck at comments, haha XD
I have seen such others comments which weren't so detailed XD

thank you for reading and the comment <33
/flattered now

>ö<
I am glad you like how I portray them ^^

awww, thaaank you ^-^
*tackles* ^-^
*feels honored*

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x_escapism_x December 18 2009, 00:42:38 UTC
AAH thank you ^o^ /
I had to read it - I was intruiged

I have to admit - I'm sometimes one of those annoying 'silent readers' unless it's really good XD

I've wrote HanChul before but...I'm never 100% it's okay -flaps-

YAY
-clings-
You should be proud of this -has it added to favourites-

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dongbangsuju20 December 18 2009, 18:58:49 UTC
ah, same here, loool XDD
I only comment when I put the fic into my rec list :x
and just for my favorite writers I write long and quote-filled comments XDDD'''
but I guess that's okay <3
so I am feeling just more honored that you wrote a comment ^-^
thank you again~

ah, it was the same for me, but thanks to my friend, my inspiration, I am able to write them now pretty easily and it seems that I get them quite well?! haha i hope so >ö<

awww ;^;
thaank you <333 ♥
if you like it, you could try the other hanchul fics I have written too :x they are in the masterlist.. *shameless advertising* ... *not so shameless* .-. *hides*

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dongbangsuju20 December 18 2009, 19:05:28 UTC
;^;
don't cry?!
*hugs*
*gives you cookies and warm chocolate*

I feel honored and flattered that you are speechless, haha <3

thank you so much ♥
I am glad you think my writing is beautiful <3~

(it's okay, I likely use that word too for describing fics <3 sometimes it is the only expression that fits haha <3 and yes~ haha XDDD thanks ^^)

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ddangkkoma December 18 2009, 18:29:37 UTC
this was really pretty to read. i like reading fics where chul is a bit too attentive to his looks and doesn't know if he's beautiful enough. it makes for very good ff imo

this was great so you def didn't have a block lol

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dongbangsuju20 December 18 2009, 19:07:13 UTC
thank you ^-^
haha, that was my first fic with that topic, I am glad you liked it <3

lool
maybe yeah XD
but that's just thanks to my friend who is kinda my inspiration, especially for hanchul XDD

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dilovesyunjae December 19 2009, 03:51:36 UTC
this is beautiful...really... ah...the insecurities an idol faces...

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