Fic: Recovering from the Shock

[cruiscin_lan]

Title: Recovering from the Shock
Characters: Mohinder/Elle, Bob Bishop
Rating: PG-13 for almost-portrayal of maybe-sex, and two f-bombs
Word Count: 2813
Disclaimer: I don't own any aspect of Heroes or its characters
Spoilers/Warnings: AU from the end of season 2.
Summary: Elle makes Mohinder realize that it does count.
A/N: Written for a

Comments

[dragynflies]

You mean "unnecessarily beta'd by Dragynflies" right? Cause this was gold on it's own.

I loved this whole thing. I was just about to go cut and paste some parts I like, but I had the whole first part cut and pasted before I realized that was a stupid plan.

In summary. You = Win.

PLZ continue.

[cruiscin_lan]

Haha, I'm glad you still like it after all my bombarding you with it and everything.

[aurilly]

Is this a sort of alternate version of 'The Day the Condom Broke: A Tragedy In Three Parts?' (not so subtle way for me to BEG you to write the other two parts). Is he going to marry her???? Are they going to keep it???? Will the child live to the age of five??? I NEED TO KNOW!!!!

I love the idea of Mohinder with this premature ejaculation, but simultaneous far-reaching sperm. Hilarious. The not-sex scene was really hot and good and DRUNK! Love. And I think you did an awesome job on the two-part scene where she tells him she's pregnant. At first you wonder if she's really just that nuts, but it subtly becomes clear that this is really sad and patent over-compensation for being so so scared. And of course he is an ass without really meaning to be.

How long was the normal gestation period for human beings? I really loved this. It's actually so apt. For example, I know art history PhD students who scratch their heads when asked to identify famous Renaissance paintings, but who can tell you all about some incredibly random Hungarian

[cruiscin_lan]

Is this a sort of alternate version of 'The Day the Condom Broke: A Tragedy In Three Parts?
No, this is The Man Who Came Too Early.

Is he going to marry her???? Are they going to keep it???? Will the child live to the age of five??? I NEED TO KNOW!!!!
OMG CAPSLOCK AND EXCLAMATION POINTS AAAHHHHH

I figured I'd post this because it seemed complete enough to be a standalone, but also leaves room for more if there's enough "plz continue" comments - or, really, I'm a sucker for one really enthusiastic one, but I'm not making any promises. ;)

[superkappa]

This was so amusing and awkward and fun. Poor Mohinder. He didn't even get to have full on sex with her, and he still knocked her up. I loved the imagine of Bob telling him to make an honest woman out of Elle. It was a nice touch.

[cruiscin_lan]

Bob Bishop refuses to stay out of my fics lately. Are you sure you don't want a Bob Bishop-centric character study for Sweet Charity?

I could include smut if you wanted!
No I couldn't who am I kidding

[superkappa]

Who can blame you? Bob is pretty awesome.

The other day in fanficrants someone was using the names Bob and Adam for a rant and mentioned Bob/Adam, and now part of me wants to see fic of that. I don't even know

[cruiscin_lan]

He just... he's so... I love Bob. I love Bob so bad.

It's so bad I have to use the small tags and leave the punctuation off my sentences

[faded_facade]

I was totally picturing a Scrubs episode where it was revealed that one of the main characters knocked up his gf when they didn't really even have actual sex. So needless to say, this was totally amusing to read and I can just picture Mohinder being all flustered at the news.

[cruiscin_lan]

Most frightening half hour of television ever.

[perdiccas]

Ahahahaha! This is hilarious!

How long was the normal gestation period for human beings?
I couldn't stop laughing for about five minutes. Frsrs.

Love it! <3