Fic: Recovering from the Shock

[cruiscin_lan]

Title: Recovering from the Shock
Characters: Mohinder/Elle, Bob Bishop
Rating: PG-13 for almost-portrayal of maybe-sex, and two f-bombs
Word Count: 2813
Disclaimer: I don't own any aspect of Heroes or its characters
Spoilers/Warnings: AU from the end of season 2.
Summary: Elle makes Mohinder realize that it does count.
A/N: Written for a

Comments

[aurilly]

Is this a sort of alternate version of 'The Day the Condom Broke: A Tragedy In Three Parts?' (not so subtle way for me to BEG you to write the other two parts). Is he going to marry her???? Are they going to keep it???? Will the child live to the age of five??? I NEED TO KNOW!!!!

I love the idea of Mohinder with this premature ejaculation, but simultaneous far-reaching sperm. Hilarious. The not-sex scene was really hot and good and DRUNK! Love. And I think you did an awesome job on the two-part scene where she tells him she's pregnant. At first you wonder if she's really just that nuts, but it subtly becomes clear that this is really sad and patent over-compensation for being so so scared. And of course he is an ass without really meaning to be.

How long was the normal gestation period for human beings?
I really loved this. It's actually so apt. For example, I know art history PhD students who scratch their heads when asked to identify famous Renaissance paintings, but who can tell you all about some incredibly random Hungarian sculptor from 1113 who sculpted every second Tuesday. Mo is so smart and advanced that in panic he might totally lose sight of the basic things that everyone knows.

Please please please please more! (I don't remember where you fell on the "please write more" commenting thing, but I don't care).

[cruiscin_lan]

Is this a sort of alternate version of 'The Day the Condom Broke: A Tragedy In Three Parts?
No, this is The Man Who Came Too Early.

Is he going to marry her???? Are they going to keep it???? Will the child live to the age of five??? I NEED TO KNOW!!!!
OMG CAPSLOCK AND EXCLAMATION POINTS AAAHHHHH

I figured I'd post this because it seemed complete enough to be a standalone, but also leaves room for more if there's enough "plz continue" comments - or, really, I'm a sucker for one really enthusiastic one, but I'm not making any promises. ;)