FIC: Another Soft Song

[cruiscin_lan]

Title: Another Soft Song
Characters: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: ~4000
Rating: R
Disclaimer: If I owned Glee then all proceeds would go towards the Howard Bamboo Legal Defense Fund.
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers up to "Sectionals;" highlight for warnings: sex, non-graphic miscarriage, strong language
Summary: Future!fic. Puck and Rachel are having

Comments

[fuzzy_paint]

Dude. You're amazing. Like, I don't even know what to say, kind of amazing.

I mean, obviously the entire premise is just so sad, but you didn't overwhelm us with it - sort of understated, not really in your face sort of thing - and that just made the impact all the more powerful.

And then the sort of hopeful ending. AMAZING.

Random things I loved:

They used to sleep like this, but slowly they had inched away from each other as they slept, ending up at opposite ends of the bed without touching. - unexpected sucker punch. And that single line says so much about the state of their marriage.

My mom does not pester," Puck interjected. I love that he sticks up for his mom.

Puck's pick-up lines. OMG ROFLMAO!

And I probably sound like a broken record, but just AMAZING.

[cruiscin_lan]

*blushes*

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and leaving such awesome feedback (and I'm not just saying that because you used the word "amazing" four times, believe me).

[conditionally]

oh. this was, really really good and i love the contrast between how puck wants a family and rachel doesn't think she's ready and i wibbled when i read the part about her not reaching her dreams and WIBBLED EVEN MORE when she said she lost the baby. it was really well-written and flowed nicely and the emotion was portrayed so so well. thanks for writing askldjf!

[cruiscin_lan]

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading. :)

[eldee]

Very good, I liked.

[cruiscin_lan]

Thanks!

[etoiledunord]

HOW DID YOU DO THE HIGHLIGHT FOR WARNINGS THING?!?!

Dude, html squee. I has it.

And I'm sure the fic is excellent.

[cruiscin_lan]

[font style="background-color: black" color="black"]warnings go here[/font]

Except, you know, change the [] marks to <>.

I did notice that it doesn't look quite right on every layout.

[wander_lust_79]

very sad...i wish it had been happy endings all around...but maybe someday....this was really great..I enjoyed reading..sorry my feedbacks lame!

[cruiscin_lan]

Yeah, maybe next time there will be happy endings. But thanks for reading!