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cruiscin_lan

FIC: At First

Jan 21, 2010 10:12

Title: At First
Characters: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: 1237
Rating: R
Disclaimer: If I owned Glee then all proceeds would go towards the Howard Bamboo Legal Defense Fund.
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers up to "Sectionals."
Summary: ...for some reason he still watches the tempting sway of her skirt when she flounces out of the music room in a huff, and she ( Read more... )

character: rachel berry, character: noah puckerman, pairing: puck/rachel, fanfiction, rating: r, fandom: glee

Comments 30

eldee January 21 2010, 15:38:39 UTC

Oh, goodness me, I got sad there for a second, but hurrah for hopeful endings. Really enjoyed it, it seemed very them! :)

cruiscin_lan January 21 2010, 15:54:24 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it. :)

faded_facade January 21 2010, 16:37:49 UTC

Something I really liked about this is that it isn't necessarily a happy story because Puck's not exactly a 'happy' character and that their relationship was never solid enough to be anything normal or happy. The ending is completely hopeful and something I can actually possibly see happening since I'd like to think each would have matured a bit since graduating from high school. I also love that you threw in Brittany and Becky in the story!

And is it wrong that when I saw you mention Pittsburgh schools, I immediately thought of CMU and Point Park?

cruiscin_lan January 21 2010, 16:45:49 UTC

Point Park was actually the one I had in mind! I felt that a direct reference would have gone over a lot of heads, though.

Next Pittsburgh reference: Primanti Bros.

faded_facade January 21 2010, 22:04:32 UTC

Can't go wrong with a Primanti Bros. reference or even a reference to the O!

humbuggirl January 21 2010, 17:02:29 UTC

I'm finding it ridiculously hard to comment on this despite the fact that I thoroughly enjoyed it. So if this sounds stupid you know why. I love the way you write these two - the perspective you use. Puck is particularly convincing - a bit of an arse, fairly opportunistic, and yet sort of soft underneath though he wouldn't admit it. The 'Finn's stood you up...' line (paragraph, really) was particularly good.

Really good work. Thanks for sharing.

cruiscin_lan January 21 2010, 18:55:59 UTC

I'm glad you liked it!

27_seconds January 21 2010, 17:23:22 UTC

Aww, loved this! The end was really cute!

cruiscin_lan January 21 2010, 18:56:12 UTC

Thanks!

wander_lust_79 January 21 2010, 17:35:13 UTC

that was pretty great...Love this pairing, even when its a little sad, but sounds like we're getting a happy ending so thats ok!!!

cruiscin_lan January 21 2010, 18:56:58 UTC

Glad you liked it! :)