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FIC: At First

Jan 21, 2010 10:12

Title: At First
Characters: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: 1237
Rating: R
Disclaimer: If I owned Glee then all proceeds would go towards the Howard Bamboo Legal Defense Fund.
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers up to "Sectionals."
Summary: ...for some reason he still watches the tempting sway of her skirt when she flounces out of the music room in a huff, and she ( Read more... )

character: rachel berry, character: noah puckerman, pairing: puck/rachel, fanfiction, rating: r, fandom: glee

Comments 30

motylik January 21 2010, 18:00:34 UTC

I really loved this. It was just so IC and the happy ending made me happy too. Finn is forever standing her up isn't he? *sighs*

cruiscin_lan January 21 2010, 18:57:40 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it.

andbless_mybaby January 21 2010, 19:35:51 UTC

You know, I forget sometimes with your crack pairings and nonstop smart-assery that you are actually a really awesome writer and shit.

I completely love your Puck/Rachel. Your Puck is fabulously in-character, and I adored the messy, angsty, still-kind-of-gorgeous progression of his and Rachel's interaction. The hotness snuck up and hit me over the head, which I'm finding tends to happen with your stories. The ending was nothing less than perfect.

cruiscin_lan January 22 2010, 16:32:03 UTC

I forget sometimes with your crack pairings and nonstop smart-assery that you are actually a really awesome writer and shit.
This is the best comment ever.

tardisgal January 21 2010, 20:04:06 UTC

That was really sweet!! I thought maybe for a minute they wouldn't get their happy ending but I'm glad they did! I'm liking the Puck/Rachel pairing more than Rachel/Finn at the moment and this fic has just cemented my love for it!

cruiscin_lan January 22 2010, 16:32:27 UTC

Glad you liked it!

xadie January 21 2010, 20:18:27 UTC

I love Romantic!Puckleberry, but this was both romantic and realistic. I really liked it!

cruiscin_lan January 22 2010, 16:33:36 UTC

I'm glad you did! Thanks for reading!

nyafangirl January 21 2010, 23:28:59 UTC

I really liked this - so very different from most of the Puckleberry fics out there, which either have them friends or fuck buddies before getting together for real. And I admire anyone who can write a realistic way to begin a relationship, because it's something I've always failed at. I prefer to break them up for the angst ;)

The subtle way you layered on the angst was brilliant. No hand-wringing or fighting, just small tugs on our heartstrings. The ending was hopeful, but not overly fluffy, which is just perfect for those two.

Also, I freaking loved that Rach didn't get her dream (yet). Again with the realism.

cruiscin_lan January 22 2010, 16:40:51 UTC

And I admire anyone who can write a realistic way to begin a relationship, because it's something I've always failed at.

I think this comes from shipping lots and lots of crack or unconventional pairings, because I have to find ways make others believe in them just as much as I do. :P

Thanks for reading!