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SPN fic: Ideal in His Grief (2/9)

Feb 08, 2010 02:06

Title: Ideal in His Grief (2/9)
Author: Furius
Rating: G to R
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Spoilers: beginning of S4
Warnings: blood and blasphemy
Word count: 5000/22500
Summary: For a soul to be lifted upwards, another had to fall. Even ending the world require sacrifices. (An account of the descent of Castiel into Hell for Dean Winchester.)

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spn, ideal in his grief, castiel, dean, dean/castiel

Comments 3

Apologies in advance for the rambling comment 22by7 February 8 2010, 12:39:46 UTC

Oh my god.

HOW TO EVEN BEGIN.

Miscellaneous observations?

1. Ugh, I love your writing. I love the rhythms. I can't get enough of the descriptions. There's something of Tolkien here, but if Guillermo del Toro had directed the Silmarillion, if that makes any sense.

2. What you did with Castiel's form in Hell and the form of the man he is destined to possess on Earth - that is such an incredible, creepy, perfect idea.

3. "It was enough." Castiel would answer, uncertain of the import of his statement, that he had not yet seen his own reflection, nor cared that he had one and what it might mean. Thought, for his superiors in heaven, was not a commendable trait in a soldier. Castiel's reply pleased them then. - Oh, this says SO MUCH in so little ( ... )

Re: Apologies in advance for the rambling comment furius February 10 2010, 08:39:39 UTC

This comment's an utter joy to read.

You have no idea how happy it makes me that at least one person likes this, where my Tolkien fandom roots are apparently showing. I love Guillermo del Toro's work, I'm waiting for the day he directs the Silmarillion....so yes, this comment's the highlight of my day.

Really, thank you for loving this rendition of Castiel. SPN fandom kills my fic-posting self-esteem like nothing else.

darkwolf5 February 10 2010, 18:12:20 UTC

"Everything here that is mine, is yours," Dean told Castiel as they crossed the threshold, "You are mine, now."

"Yes," Castiel said, amiable, "I am yours." . - these are just such an amazing couple of lines...And I could qoute many more,but I wont for fear of writing small essay...

What else can I say about this story other than WOW.I rarely read multiparters but this one has me hooked. You write beautifully, your sentance structures and words....This honestly has to be one of the best stories I have read, and I can't wait for then next part...I just....yes...this story rocks. Anyway thats quite enough of my rambling...Like I said, amazing story, looking fowards to its continuation.