ask me a question & i'll--

[crimsoncookie]

maybe i ought finish one before i start another, but... ♥

taken from syvia, lindskaba, tabitha_dornoc:

ask me about my fic--something i wrote, character, plotline, even a really short commentary--and i'll give you an explanation, snippet, or something. kind of like a dvd commentary, but shorter and faster.

Comments

[syvia]

Oh hell... um... :/

*thinking*

I hope this isn't too vague; a little commentary on your favorite (or a part you're very proud of) bit of Nothing and Moonlight, plz? ^^

[crimsoncookie]

eeek, hard!

mmm... let's see. ♥ from the third part of nothing and moonlight (beware of talking!ceci) -

She lost track of time, sitting in the twilight with dog and shadow and moon up above - days of her own voice and imaginings, and hooded figures outside which maybe she had dreamed, and sometimes just his eyes, his silence, watching - so when the tendrils twined throughout the room she could only wonder if it was real, really happening, before he spoke-

the story-sections all begin in long, image-heavy thoughts without sentence-breaks - there's a certain element of it usually in my natural style, but i tried to run with it more purposefully in n&m - kairi's almost dreaming awake throughout the story, and i wanted it to have that shudderquick feeling of everything tumbling or flowing like in fevers or dreams. ♥

i wanted to leave the possibility open that other organization members might have been there, though it seems more that saïx was keeping her for himself a secret -- xemnas denies knowledge of her, and in final mix, when

[tabitha_dornoc]

I'm curious about something in Nothing and Moonlight as well. When reading it, I find it difficult to figure out Kairi's opinion of Saix. She seems to almost pity him, yet it seems a far way to go with someone out of curiousity or pity. Is she ultimately afraid of him and just letting go? Does she feel something close to liking or loving, or is it negative? She seems so closed up in what she's thinking, it makes me unsure what to think as well.

[crimsoncookie]

hope. ♥ she hopes that she can complete him, help him, keep him from hurting or hurting her, fill the emptiness in his eyes - she hopes that being a princess of heart might be enough for that (because what else is it good for, then?). it echoes in naminé, who hopes through kairi that she might be able to retell her story with marluxia, but with a happy ending - hoping that kairi's heart might complete saïx where her own lack couldn't help marluxia.

but - she can't. and she finds that at the end, when she realizes that saïx will hurt her just to hurt sora. but she still wants to keep trying, even then - it's only her promise to sora and riku that stops her from staying.

i'm in ur lj, asking u questions :3

[lindskaba]

I know how much you love to write Kairi and Naminami, but which male(s) in the Kingdom Hearts verse do you enjoy writing most? Or is there a guy outside of Kingdom Hearts who is particularly easy for you to write? Are boys harder to write for you in general?

Re: i'm in ur lj, asking u questions :3

[crimsoncookie]

subject love~~! ♥

omg yes - boys are much harder for me to write. i think their dialogue comes out all right (i love saïx in nothing and moonlight thank you yo_yo_san) but it seems much harder to just drop into their heads and feel as they do? there's some preference and lack of practice i know, but still there's always a little bit of disconnect when i write a boy. i think... i think i don't so much identify with boys, and i like more to write characters i feel a connection to. (kairi & naminami. ♥)

um um um... but i sekritly love to rp silly sora. ♥ & i think i might enjoy writing roxas, especially in twilight town - memories with his friends, maybe. ♥

outside of kh i wrote many terrible snippets from the pov of fei, the heroish of xenogears. ♥ i don't know so much i felt a connection with him -- but lots of situations i wanted to explore through his eyes. ♥

maybe i should try to write more boys...?