[fic] five acts: my list

[crickets]

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out of the ashes we might be reborn, Jack/Sun, travel, angst, tattoos

[ozmissage]

Somewhere in the waking they lost some essential bit of themselves, she had a daughter that would never be, he had a son that he did not know

Re: out of the ashes we might be reborn, Jack/Sun, travel, angst, tattoos

[crickets]

I love the entire concept of this. That first line kind of just punches you in the gut, doesn't it? Ouch. It's the perfect scenario to have them thrown together.

It's sweet and subtle and just dark enough to suit me.

I really love the stuff about his tattoo and how Sun takes comfort in that it still exists. Really love that for some reason.

Her finger lands on a plot of land in the center of the country, far, far away from any ocean.

I'm with Jack on this one: Perfect.

And I adore that last line. Sun saying she'll drive. It really fits here and fits the transformation she's been on all these seasons.

Re: out of the ashes we might be reborn, Jack/Sun, travel, angst, tattoos

[ozmissage]

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked it!

I love reading this pairing, but I had never written them before. Sun's voice is always hard for me to get a handle on. :)