Comments | crickets: fic - the way out is through, spn, john

crickets

fic - the way out is through, spn, john - nc17

Dec 27, 2007 23:52

Title: The Way Out is Through
Fandom, Characters: supernatural - john-centric ( with bill, mary, demon )
Words, Rating: 2300-ish, nc17
Summary: You can’t exactly die twice, can you?
Warnings: torture, non-con, violence, disturbing imagery, hell!fic
A/N: Beta read by kmousie. Written as a request for disanddat for Sweet Charity.
( Non timebo mala. I will fear no evil. )

sweet charity, !fanfic, fanfic: spn

Comments 19

phantomas December 29 2007, 17:06:04 UTC

Meant to say, I LIKE it! :D

crickets December 30 2007, 02:33:55 UTC

Haha, I knew what you meant. :P

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crickets December 31 2007, 17:12:01 UTC

Lol you weirdo.

disanddat January 1 2008, 18:27:03 UTC

Visiting relatives and obligations kept me away from the net until now, but here I am. Okay... let me get over my initial 'oh wow' wide-eyes and inability to be coherent.

...her talons clicking against the wall

Shape-changing demons rock. It's a gruesome introduction to the concept, gruesome in the best possible way. She/he/it is fascinating.

Besides, can't exactly die twice, can you?
Which is part of what makes a soul's time in hell so much MORE! Bill is an interesting choice of guides. Not someone expected, and thereby more intriguing. Just this little hint of hope makes the torture more severe.

In life, John Winchester had never seen a demon in the flesh.
Puts me in mind of that Buffy:tVS episode where they first see a FULL demon in the flesh. Ohh... the suggestion that John's mercy killing of Bill had more layers than were suggested on the show. Cool. The last few spaced out words/lines, very effective.

Like pages of the Bible swimming in holy water, they disappear.The suggestion of wincest is so very subtle, but I want to ( ... )

crickets January 12 2008, 20:48:08 UTC

Ah sorry I didn't get to this sooner. I remembered you'd commented and I was sure I responded back but I was looking at this today and saw that I hadn't. Oops!

Anyway I just wanted to say thank you so much for the amazing prompt. It really pushed me, but I'm happy with the results. And I am just thrilled that you liked it and that it met what you were trying to get. Yay!

a_phoenixdragon January 27 2008, 08:24:19 UTC

Wow!!

Omyyyy...

*Swallows thickly*

Thank you...

*hugs*

crickets January 27 2008, 14:55:02 UTC

Oh, you're welcome? You gonna be okay over there? I hope all that means you liked it. Hee.

a_phoenixdragon January 27 2008, 15:04:52 UTC

Oh, yes! I loved it!!

I think I'll survive...

*Hugs you*

crickets January 27 2008, 15:05:33 UTC

Aw, well thank you. *hugs you back*