Comments | creativity4life: [fanfiction] Dancing is the perpendicular expression of a horizontal desire (2/3)

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[fanfiction] Dancing is the perpendicular expression of a horizontal desire (2/3)

Jan 01, 2008 23:11

( Part 2 )

2007, dwts_fic, J², !fanart: fanfiction, rating: nc17

Comments 67

michaela3105 January 2 2008, 12:26:33 UTC

I'm so glad you finally updated and I really hope we get to read the last part very soon! First of all, I love your sense of humor!!! "selling a freezer to an Eskimo" must be one of the funniest lines I've ever read. LMAO!!!

The phone sex was HOT! You did an amazing job with it. Good thing I'm going to take a shower now :)

Can't wait to see how it all ends. Thank's for a great story *hugs*

chaotic4life January 2 2008, 18:20:00 UTC

Glad you like it! At least it was worth the wait ;)
Can't believe it actually happened and I could post it...sometime in there I thought I would cry.

Thank you ♥

jenskyies January 2 2008, 15:06:31 UTC

This is so much fun. I adore Jared when he acts like a puppy and hurt!Jensen is kind of heartbreaking, because Jared is right there, hon, and he loves you. And Jared unintentionally being a sneaky little puppy dog amuses me, especially since he doesn't seem so adept at interpreting the information he gets. The ending kind of worries me though, because, oh, so much potential for misunderstandings and pain. But pain is good as long as it ends up happy. :-) I really enjoy this and am looking forward to the next part.

chaotic4life January 2 2008, 18:24:34 UTC

Aww...silly boys and being clueless. :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing.

shelgrainger2 January 2 2008, 15:59:47 UTC

This is a really great. I loved a drinken Jared having hot phone sex with Jensen and then falling asleep lol! Poor baby, can't remember! I am really looking forward to the last part.

chaotic4life January 2 2008, 18:22:25 UTC

Thank you ♥

Yep, drinking ... not always a good idea *lol*
Awkward!!!!!!!

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chaotic4life January 2 2008, 18:23:35 UTC

Thanks! I am happy the new chapter kept up your expactations.
I am working on the last part. It should happen soonish ....

amtamburo January 2 2008, 20:21:04 UTC

:) I love this... are you sure that 3 parts is enough? ~giggles~ Just kidding... but I can tell that I am seriously going to want more of this!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Angi

chaotic4life January 3 2008, 06:19:44 UTC

Thanks ♥

Actually, believe it or not, I am not sure 3 parts will be enough *g* ... or part 3 will be novel lenghth - so I maybe have to spread it into 4 parts. Somehow the boys got away from me. We'll see.