Fic - Speed Racer (Movie '08) - Yakuza/Speed

[creativestrata]

Title: Dark Eyes
Fandom: Speed Racer (Movie '08)
Pairing: Yakuza x Speed

Rating: PG-13

Description:  Speed could feel dark eyes upon him during the Grand Prix.
Disclaimer: I don't own Speed Racer!!

Comments

[lali_lemons]

Hi!

Your fic is awesome! You write Teppi(Teppedoma)/Joon/Yakuza (take your pick) so well! I love that Speed ends up fighting with himself over whether he enjoyed the kiss or not. I can see him being haunted later on over whether he really wants Mr.Yakuza to keep his word and come to see him again.

and boy! that kiss!! Him chuckling and being smooth and in control the entire time is absolute love!

He now realized of what that foreign look in the other racer’s eyes was. Hunger. -- This line was perfect!

Very shot, sweet and enjoyable! XD I'd love to see more of your stories <3

[stratataisen]

Thanks! ^-^ I'm glad you liked it. I was actually worried that it didn't turn out well. ^-^;

And I have to ask, where did the name Teppedoma come from?? Is it a random name someone came up with and it stuck or does it have some meaning behind it??

[lali_lemons]

XD I think it turned out quite well for a short ficlet! I love the yakuza man anyway and I know how hard it is to write for a character that honestly has little to no development! So all the more awesome that people write him! cause he's a doll

[stratataisen]

o.O Seriously! He has a name? Why do I always feel like I'm the last to know. ;-; Well, I guess I can use it for my Yakuza/Taejo fic.

I'm glad I got him right, or at least to everyones satisfaction. ^-^

Wow!!

[bittenfeld]

golly gosh golly this is hot!

At first when he comes to Speed after the race, and "the malicious intent was gone", I thought, oh okay a nice sweet little tryst. But then suddenly our boy is slammed up against the lockers. "let go of me." "no, i don't think I'm going to." Holy **** ! Then a hard kiss that is as hardcore as full rough-sex. (and Speed likes it...!) Wow.

For as little as we saw of Teppi, you got him spot-on!

yeah, my legs are like jelly too right now...

Re: Wow!!

[stratataisen]

Oh god, you're making me blush. *blush*

I'm glad you like it. ^-^

[notoriouspirate]

I enjoyed this :) Very hot. Nice build up to the kiss, you write both of them well. I find it's especially hard to write an already existing character that doesn't have much character development like our yakuza driver. Kinda wish I was Speed, he's wanted by so many hot men xD

[stratataisen]

Thank you! ^-^ Glad you liked it.

And I know what you mean. I want a hot white haired asian man pinning me against a wall and kissing me silly. ;-;