Fic - Speed Racer (Movie '08) - Yakuza/Speed

[creativestrata]

Title: Dark Eyes
Fandom: Speed Racer (Movie '08)
Pairing: Yakuza x Speed

Rating: PG-13

Description:  Speed could feel dark eyes upon him during the Grand Prix.
Disclaimer: I don't own Speed Racer!!

Comments

[lali_lemons]

Hi!

Your fic is awesome! You write Teppi(Teppedoma)/Joon/Yakuza (take your pick) so well! I love that Speed ends up fighting with himself over whether he enjoyed the kiss or not. I can see him being haunted later on over whether he really wants Mr.Yakuza to keep his word and come to see him again.

and boy! that kiss!! Him chuckling and being smooth and in control the entire time is absolute love!

He now realized of what that foreign look in the other racer’s eyes was. Hunger. -- This line was perfect!

Very shot, sweet and enjoyable! XD I'd love to see more of your stories <3

[stratataisen]

Thanks! ^-^ I'm glad you liked it. I was actually worried that it didn't turn out well. ^-^;

And I have to ask, where did the name Teppedoma come from?? Is it a random name someone came up with and it stuck or does it have some meaning behind it??

[lali_lemons]

XD I think it turned out quite well for a short ficlet! I love the yakuza man anyway and I know how hard it is to write for a character that honestly has little to no development! So all the more awesome that people write him! cause he's a doll

[stratataisen]

o.O Seriously! He has a name? Why do I always feel like I'm the last to know. ;-; Well, I guess I can use it for my Yakuza/Taejo fic.

I'm glad I got him right, or at least to everyones satisfaction. ^-^

[lali_lemons]

Oh honey don't feel bad. I've been obsessing over this movie since it came out (Like I've literally seen it at least 20 times >D) And I JUST FOUND THIS OUT 2 WEEKS AGO! XDDDD I'm pretty sure most of the people on Spee_Fic still have no idea. So feel superior XDDDD

Can't wait to see your next one!!!

[stratataisen]

hehe

Hopefully I can get it written. >.< One sentance in and I'm already stuck. LOL