Poison, Fire, Death [3/3]

[crashingtragedy]

Title: Poison, Fire, Death
Pairing: broken!Minsu, Yoosu
Genre: Angst, drama
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s): Mention of rape
Summary: Sometimes, poison isn't the one doing all the killings.
A/N: The end to this mini-series finally. Am extremely sorry for the wait, to whoever reads this, thank you so much! For sleeplesshadow, like always, and for

Comments

[sleeplesshadow]

OMG. This is deep.

It left me speechless. Frankly, I haven't been reading more than 3 stories for the past two weeks. I don't even know how to express my feelings anymore. XD

Junsu hates Changmin. It is in fact a bit cruel, but it is reality. No matter how close a person is, it is still hurtful as to what Changmin did to Junsu. I just can't believe Junsu would recover once Changmin is gone. It kind of make me dislike Junsu a little bit. I know, Junsu have lotsa reason to be angry with Changmin, but I just didn't want him to actually wish for someone died.

I'm biased. I want Su to be innocent. Purely innocent. But, it's just what I wish. I don't think Junsu is innocent at all.

This story is indeed deep.

The wind blew gently, secrets swirling within its whispering depths.

Jun … Su …
I really like this part. It feel like Changmin's enchantment to his loved one.

Nicely written. Thumb up.^^

[ekin_hardy]

angsty but so real---the feelings are conveyed real-ly...

knowing for half-similar experience...i've been slowly wishing for that person to die too...hope God will forgive me, ne..

[padmik]

oh my god. this is dark.

i love dark and twisted plots.

to tell you the truth, junsu even feels like poison to me. I feel addicted to him whenever i watch their videos. My eyes always fall on him. He's dangerous.

changmin sort of reminded me of a plague that overtook junsu until he died and the plague diminished. So sad D: I did feel bad for Changmin though because in the end, he was hurting just as much as Junsu was.

amazing writing~ ^^

[awshin]

At least Junsu is recovering from his depression but it's sad to see that it took Changmin's death for Junsu to start recovering. I guess... once you commit a bad deed, everyone remembers that one bad deed over all the past good deeds you've done.

I pity Junsu. But I pity Changmin too, it wasn't his fault that he fell in love with Junsu. For Yoochun, he deserved to be pitied too. All he could do was to be there for Junsu and of course how he should face Changmin after that violation since Changmin is his good friend as well. Good friend and lover, choose between one?

All in all, good mini story. I like it! = ) What happened to the chaptered story? *ahem*thedevil'sride*ahem*

[yoosu_sarang]

I re-read this again but i thought i left some comments already D: while in my lurking mode and omgg, I want you to post this to yoosu comm like gogogo because it's so good! I kind of feel sorry for minniekins but you made me sadface at him because he raped junsu DD: although it was unintentionally, it still made me go whoa when it was obvious junsu hated changmin's gut.

at the guilt drove him to kill himself when junsu wasn't being his usual self. man, i was like ooh, that gotta hurt like a bitch when it was only by changmin's death su returned back to himself. poor minmin /cuddles him.