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Fiction: A Change on the Wind

Jan 27, 2009 01:59

Title: A Change on the Wind
Author: CrabbyLioness
Main Characters: Merlin, Arthur, Uther
Summary: immediately after The Poisoned Chalice.
Disclaimer: If I owned them, they'd have different plot holes.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 769
Spoilers: I've only seen through Episode 4.

( Arthur looked around slowly, carefully schooling his face into an expression of calm to mask his growing unease. )

merlin, fic

Comments 29

_profiterole_ January 28 2009, 20:02:21 UTC

That was such an interesting take on the boys and on Camelot. ^_^

crabby_lioness January 28 2009, 20:58:10 UTC

Thank you. :)

heartofoshun January 29 2009, 03:14:14 UTC

Great ambience and characterization. I do hope you will write more.

crabby_lioness January 29 2009, 03:18:15 UTC

Thank you.

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crabby_lioness February 8 2009, 06:35:02 UTC

Knowing Arthur, the geese will be fed peppered bread.

xel1980 February 9 2009, 14:20:10 UTC

I totally love it! Please write more Merlin's fics if u can! <3

crabby_lioness February 9 2009, 16:37:36 UTC

Thank you! I've ideas for three more fics, but I'm waiting to see the rest of the series. I'm only up to episode 7 so far.

xel1980 February 9 2009, 18:47:57 UTC

Oh, the best slashy episode will come later! ;)
Keep watching! <3

mossylawn February 17 2009, 16:25:56 UTC

"Hey!" Arthur cried at Merlin's swiftly retreating form as laughter floated back to him. He felt the hat start to tilt, and to his surprise found himself jerking his head to seat it properly instead of knocking it off. The pressure of the band brought with it ghostly reminders of Merlin's fingers brushing his face, reminders that along with the sound of his laughter, the memory of his grin, and the view of Merlin's backside stirred up feelings in Arthur he did not yet know how to name or want to.

This is so adequate and in character. They're kids after all, kids in love, but while we can see that it will take time time to wipe out all this heady confusion out of their heads.
Haha and the hat revenge. I'd love to see that in an episode.

crabby_lioness February 24 2009, 22:19:27 UTC

Thank you. "Heady confusion" is a pretty good description of a teenage boy's baseline. :)