Opinions needed

[covenmouse]

Trying to write a short snippet... synopsis thingie for Endangered.  These are the two I have so far; opinions/preferences anyone?

"Blanca Rodriguez Abarca is being tracked by the world's most psychotic trophy hunter. Osías Rios Vargas has crossed an ocean to leave his past behind.  Together, the two have learned to skim by on the bare minimums of

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[covenmouse]

That seems to be the consensus thus far. XD I have to say, I'm kind of preferring it myself. Just wasn't sure if it was giving away too much.

[mrcrybrilliance]

Seconded