Opinions needed
Trying to write a short snippet... synopsis thingie for Endangered. These are the two I have so far; opinions/preferences anyone?
"Blanca Rodriguez Abarca is being tracked by the world's most psychotic trophy hunter. Osías Rios Vargas has crossed an ocean to leave his past behind. Together, the two have learned to skim by on the bare minimums of life. But when their world collides with that of a hot-tempered orphan, everything seems to go belly up. Now with their demons nipping at their heels, the threesome must decide to fly or fight."
or
"Endangered follows the misadventures of three people who want one simple thing: a break. But with a world renowned hunter on their trail, a militia of ticked off farmers at every corner, and a madman intent on locking them away forever, it seems that none of them are going to get their wish."
Originally posted at The Mouse Hole.
"Blanca Rodriguez Abarca is being tracked by the world's most psychotic trophy hunter. Osías Rios Vargas has crossed an ocean to leave his past behind. Together, the two have learned to skim by on the bare minimums of life. But when their world collides with that of a hot-tempered orphan, everything seems to go belly up. Now with their demons nipping at their heels, the threesome must decide to fly or fight."
or
"Endangered follows the misadventures of three people who want one simple thing: a break. But with a world renowned hunter on their trail, a militia of ticked off farmers at every corner, and a madman intent on locking them away forever, it seems that none of them are going to get their wish."
Originally posted at The Mouse Hole.