(You And I) Collide 14/?

[court_1014]

Pairing: Quinn/Rachel
Length: 1,878
Rating: PG-13 so far.. might change in the future
Spoilers: Through season 2
Summary: Quinn's tired of Sam, so decides to comfort Rachel after her break up with Finn. She never expected that comforting Rachel would lead to this.
A/N: Sorry for the long wait (again). School is consuming 90% of my time lately. I don't

Comments

[mjacton]

Good that you updated, but I would suggest you make sure you're happy with what you've written before you post. It's more important that you post the best you can do.

This is a little rushed, especially the conversation with Finn. It seems a little unnatural. Quinn tells him too easily, and it seems like you meant for Finn to seem homophobic but he really just seems stupid, which he is but still. And, I'm not really sure what was going with Rachel after Quinn told her about Finn. I guess the dialogue doesn't match the story as you've laid it out. Flesh it out more.

[court_1014]

Thank you for your honesty. It's really helpful. I will definitely make the next chapter better. Thanks again :)

[malexfaith]

Yay. They are happy. I'm happy. Lol. Thanks heaps for sharing

[court_1014]

:)