FILLED: Shadowsmilly_galOctober 17 2013, 09:20:42 UTC
Don't know if this is allowed as it's a comment meme, but I wrote this before the prompts came out so...Posted up on my lj milly-gal.livejournal.com/17280.html
FILLED: A guest amid ruinscounteragentOctober 11 2013, 02:27:04 UTC
Dean and Ezekiel walked the streets of Sam’s mind together. The city behind the broken wall had been leveled. Gutted husks of buildings stared with empty eyes, their windows shattered. All was silent. The cars-all ’67 Impalas-were wrecked, rusted corpses. Dean had to look away
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Re: FILLED: A guest amid ruinsash48October 11 2013, 04:05:53 UTC
Oh honey - I adore this landscape. What a fabulous idea that Dean's true age showed for what it was in this place. It's devastating that so much damage is there. The image of the library is heartbreaking. Worse, of course, that Sam finally asked Dean to stop - just when things could be fixed. Agh...I understood that right yeah? The demon child won. Sam's spoke and no doubt Dean will now have to listen.
This is exactly the reason why I think I'm going to love the season (though too early to tell I suppose), because the idea opens up such brilliant narrative opportunities. If not on the show, then definitely in fanfic. Thank you for this!! <333
Re: FILLED: A guest amid ruinscounteragentOctober 11 2013, 12:43:28 UTC
Yay! Glad you liked the imagery. I really wanted to get across a sense of damage without getting super medical about it.
I actually was trying to say that Sam wanted them to stop fixing him Ezekiel's way--that Ezekiel was perhaps repairing him in a way that Sam found repellent, but your reading is certainly a valid reaction to what I have here! And an interesting but even sadder direction.
Ezekiel inside Sam's head meets up with some of Sam's alter egos - they could be the ones we've already seen or maybe new ones that represent other aspects of Sam.
Aspects of Sam try and puzzle out what the hell aspect of himself Ezekiel is supposed to represent. High jinks ensue.
I actually said this at the end of the first viewing with friends. I said it as a joke (as in, plot twist - this is never going to happen) but I would actually be interested to see if this could be worked into a fic somehow.
When Sam find out what Dean did he says: ""Good call man. Thanks. I wasn't in a fit state to make a life and death decision".
The old girl in the launderette tells her knitting club about the guy stripping down to his boxers - they are a little sceptical until she brings Cas in to re-enact the scene.
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This is exactly the reason why I think I'm going to love the season (though too early to tell I suppose), because the idea opens up such brilliant narrative opportunities. If not on the show, then definitely in fanfic. Thank you for this!! <333
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I actually was trying to say that Sam wanted them to stop fixing him Ezekiel's way--that Ezekiel was perhaps repairing him in a way that Sam found repellent, but your reading is certainly a valid reaction to what I have here! And an interesting but even sadder direction.
Maybe I'll improve and expand this later... :)
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Aspects of Sam try and puzzle out what the hell aspect of himself Ezekiel is supposed to represent. High jinks ensue.
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When Sam find out what Dean did he says: ""Good call man. Thanks. I wasn't in a fit state to make a life and death decision".
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