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[CHAPTERFIC] You Can't Take the Sky from Me Chapter Twenty-Two (Axis Powers Hetalia)

Mar 30, 2010 07:49

Title: You Can't Take the Sky from Me [FF.NET Chapter Twenty-Two] [ Writing Journal Previous Chapters ]
Pairing: AmericaxEngland, PolandxLithuania, GermanyxItaly, SpainxRomano, Belarus---->Russia, PrussiaxSwitzerland. Future pairings: GreecexJapan, HungaryxAustria, SwedenxFinland
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama/Action+Adventure/Alternate ( Read more... )

pairing: americaxengland, fanfic: chapter fic, character: england, fandom: axis powers hetalia, character: america, fanfic: you can't take the sky from me, fanfic

Comments 38

revoiment_hika March 30 2010, 15:13:07 UTC

FIRST

hmm, maybe it's just me but it felt a little too short..?
but really, I'm happy for an update from you. I've been waiting for this~

Now, I really like America and Belgium's conversation here. She sounds like a really great captain and make me love here even more ♥ Also Kenya and Zimbabwe's appearance was a bit unexpected there. But with you and the character role it's not really surprising either I guess XD

And with Iggy back on the air, I'm sure it'll be more exciting~
can't wait for more ;D

haro April 13 2010, 21:54:10 UTC

It was about the same length as my other chapters. They all fall between 3k-3,500, and this was on the upper end of that. :)

But thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. I really enjoyed writing all of those characters.

sakuratsukikage March 30 2010, 20:04:03 UTC

This was just epic, as usual. I really appreciated this look into the world that the story takes place in this time. I thought it was really engaging, bringing us along--there were a ton of different personalities in play, and you handled them all really well! Zimbabwe and Kenya were a surprise to me, and I felt like you did a great job with them. They were epic. And America buying the necklace for England . . . I loved the bit about blue being a good color. It just seemed so America to me. And I loved the world-building details, like all the merchants not leaving, and that being why it was so dirty. Belgium was absolutely awesome. I loved her comments to America so much XD. I was grinning from ear to ear--it's true. XD He's adorable. And this line: America nodded mutely. “I’m a lot more worried about you, ya know? You silly brave boy.” I loved that XD. She's kind of a badass older sister or something, and I love that role for her. And the mention of Luxembourg! So awesome ( ... )

nutellabrot March 30 2010, 20:29:02 UTC

~ oh it was adorable <3
I swear I was waiting so long for this moment xD [and I´m still waiting for the moment when America and England will meet up again~ :D]

this chapter was really cool^^
I´m looking forward to the time when America will [hopefully] give England this necklace~ [<-- just want to get the two together xD]

I´m burning for the next update <3

haro April 13 2010, 21:54:45 UTC

Thank you! That moment is coming, trust me. ;)

chiisana00 March 30 2010, 21:11:11 UTC

You got me thinking about America/Belgium now xD

“A spy?” Zimbabwe interrupted. “Nah, I don’t. Or if you are, you’re a pretty shitty one.” - -Nods- Really, I so agree there~

I'm only afraid that it's indeed the spies from the Kosmider America talked to here x-x

I loved the part of Victoria going to air again. Can almost picture everything. The blue sky, the breeeze and the sound of steam puffs. It's so realistic and dreamy~

haro April 13 2010, 21:55:35 UTC

LOL.

Yeah, America would not be the best of spies.

Thank you very much!~

Sorry no LJ! anonymous March 30 2010, 23:39:34 UTC

I don't have an Lj but I wanted to let you know how much I love your stories. This steamy world is such a fascinating place and the way the characters interact both with it and each other is believable and natural, it’s what drew me to this AU, that and the sheer scale of it.
I was so excited when this updated, I read comments all the time about how postings have made someone’s day or whatever and can’t help but roll my eyes but I get it now. I love this fic so much that when I saw it had updated I couldn’t help but grin, it really DID make my day much brighter, thanks for that. Events seem to be lining up; I’m really excited to see where this is going. Good luck and keep writing don’t stop, you’re wonderful, this is wonderful, and it’ll make someone’s day!

Re: Sorry no LJ! haro April 14 2010, 04:56:27 UTC

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment even though you don't have an lj. That means a lot!

I'm really, really glad you enjoy this story to that level and that you like the world I've created.

And aww, I'm glad it cheers you up! It's really <333 when anyone tells me that my updates do that for them.

Lastly, yes things are lining up. Big things will be happening soon. ;)