[CHAPTERFIC] You Can't Take the Sky from Me Chapter Twenty-Two (Axis Powers Hetalia)

Mar 30, 2010 07:49

Title: You Can't Take the Sky from Me [FF.NET Chapter Twenty-Two] [ Writing Journal Previous Chapters ]
Pairing: AmericaxEngland, PolandxLithuania, GermanyxItaly, SpainxRomano, Belarus---->Russia, PrussiaxSwitzerland. Future pairings: GreecexJapan, HungaryxAustria, SwedenxFinland
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama/Action+Adventure/Alternate ( Read more... )

pairing: americaxengland, fanfic: chapter fic, character: england, fandom: axis powers hetalia, character: america, fanfic: you can't take the sky from me, fanfic

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lily_winterwood March 30 2010, 23:48:54 UTC
*LE GASP* JE VOUS AIME. ♥

*stalks you for more*

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haro April 13 2010, 21:55:55 UTC
Thanks!

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pantstacular March 31 2010, 02:35:41 UTC
Yay!!!! First off, I loved the detail in this chapter a lot. You did such a wonderful job with describing the scene and really making it feel real. And America's convo with Belgium was so cute. I loved when he was happy for her and tried to correct himself a little. But that shows how far he had come. I really enjoyed Belgium as a character she was really awesome ( ... )

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midori_lover March 31 2010, 10:15:24 UTC
YAY FOR UPDATE!

I loved Belgium here. She sounded like a really awesome and bad-ass captain. And I also loved that you included characters that aren't really given much attention like Kenya and Zimbabwe.

Your descriptions in the last paragraph were really good too! I could really picture the sea and the sky. Looks like things are becoming more exciting with England back up in the sky. XD

Anyways, great great chapter as always! ♥

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haro April 14 2010, 01:47:16 UTC
Thank you! I really enjoyed writing those characters. I've always thought the African nations deserved more love.

Yes, things will definitely be picking up. ;)

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jienyap March 31 2010, 10:32:18 UTC
awesome~~~

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haro April 13 2010, 21:56:21 UTC
Thank you!

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kazu_is_awesome March 31 2010, 14:27:55 UTC
MIRACLES HAPPEN!!

You updated!^^
Christmas and Easter must have fallen on ONE day xD

No, seriously, I missed You Can't Take The Sky From Me so much! >___<

I'm so happy that my dear Captain Kirkland appeared again - you can't believe it!!

This chapter was so...perfect
I imagined the Babako being all filthy like this, so~

Can't wait for you to continue, because it's getting quite suspenseful
And of course I want more Captain Kirkland~
Because he's cute >w< *fangirl squeal*

That totally made my day!
Thank you sooooo much!

*huggles*

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haro April 14 2010, 01:48:09 UTC
I'm so sorry it took me so long to update. I'm trying to get on a better updating schedule. XD

Anyway, thanks! I'm glad it excited you so much, and yes, England is quite adorable.

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kazu_is_awesome April 16 2010, 14:06:34 UTC
As long as the chapters are as good and AWESOME as usually, I don't mind your schedule! Really! xD

You're welcome!^^
Oh, yes~ He's sooooo...England xD *loves him to death*

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