BtVS Fic: Outside Pride (Spike/Xander, 10/10, PG-13 *COMPLETE*)

[cordelianne]

Thanks to work being crazy-busy and me going to yoga 5 days a week, I'm finding that I'm behind on replying to comments, commenting and reading. A special thank you to everyone for the wonderful comments on Five Times Xander Doesn't Tell Spike He Loves Him (And One Time He Does) - I've been grinning for weeks over those comments (and am still

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[cordelianne]

I apologize for how long it's taken me to reply to your awesome comment - the holidays took me away from LJ.

I'm so happy that you felt that song lyric is a good fit for Cordelia! And hee to you being familiar with the colour yuck!

Thanks for your great comment! :D

[bookstorequeer]

Awww, so cute. Very sweet and I love how it worked out in the end. Lovely.

[cordelianne]

I'm so pleased that you enjoyed the story and apologize for how long it took me to reply. Thanks so much! :D

[missus_grace]

You have so many nice fnishing touches here.

He’s two seconds away from borrowing eyeliner from one of the girls and emo-ing out

“It’s all repression, repression, repression and then next thing you know they’re caught snorting blow off a teen hooker.”

He hasn’t looked Xander in the eye since walking in on Xander’s very practical demonstration of how to do the gay.

And making Dru and Darla the batty old foster mums was great. Along with the making up between Xander and Jesse.

Well done!

[cordelianne]

I'm so pleased you enjoyed the finishing touches. And it's great to know which lines you especially liked. Sorry for taking so long to reply, the holidays sucked up my time. Thanks for your lovely comment! :D

[solitudecoven]

Marvelous. Cute and funny.

[cordelianne]

That's fantastic to hear! Sorry for the delay in my reply to your great comment. Thanks! :D

[brunettepet]

Thanks for the wonderful, hopeful ending. Your attention to detail painted vivid scenes and the dialogue was always in voice. Leaving our two guys grinning goofily at one another was perfect.

This made me laugh out loud: "It’s all repression, repression, repression and then next thing you know they’re caught snorting blow off a teen hooker.” What a stellar, in voice line.

This was also a great Xander mental aside: "Objects in the mirror may be closer than they appear, but they’re getting further away by the second."

This entertaining story is one I'll revisit in the future. Thanks for the highly entertaining read.

[cordelianne]

Your comment continues to make me delighted! I apologize for how long it's taken me to reply, the holidays took me away from LJ for far too long. I'm very pleased by the lines that you quoted. Thanks for your awesome comment! :D