Ooh, I forgot it was Tuesday! Still enjoying this, even though I don't know who the hell anybody except Spike and Xander are. *g* Nice writing.
“Wow, I’m so impressed that worked! You’re definitely getting sex later.” “Was that ever in question?” Hee! Excellent motivational tactics - but no, I can't see Xander *really* denying Spike... ;)
I love your description of Xander's nervousness. It feels very real.
He vowed to never to look through a girl’s garbage again. *snerk* Lovely touch. As are salivating guard dogs and Xander's tumbleweed babble.
hee! Yes, I'm trying to stick to the Tuesday posting day. I'm very glad you're enjoying it despite not knowing who the Veronica Mars folks are. The guy in my icon is Logan Echolls (the guy who confronts Xander at the end of the chapter).
I also can't see Xander denying Spike for long! *g* And I'm pleased that Xander's nervousness felt very real! Yay to enjoying the girl's garbage comment, that's a favourite of mine! I'm glad those details worked for you!
And cliffhanger ending! Aaugh! More! :D Yay! That makes me happy! Thanks!! *g*
Haha, it hit me the intersection here- Trina = Willow, sort of. Wonder if they'll think hmmm when they see her... Nice job so far, I'll be looking for the rest : )
Thanks! It is very fun to have the Trina & Willow intersection, especially considering how unWillow Trina is. I'm happy to hear you're enjoying it! I'm planning to post new chapters each Tuesday. *g*
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“Wow, I’m so impressed that worked! You’re definitely getting sex later.”
“Was that ever in question?” Hee! Excellent motivational tactics - but no, I can't see Xander *really* denying Spike... ;)
I love your description of Xander's nervousness. It feels very real.
He vowed to never to look through a girl’s garbage again. *snerk* Lovely touch. As are salivating guard dogs and Xander's tumbleweed babble.
And cliffhanger ending! Aaugh! More! :D
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I also can't see Xander denying Spike for long! *g* And I'm pleased that Xander's nervousness felt very real! Yay to enjoying the girl's garbage comment, that's a favourite of mine! I'm glad those details worked for you!
And cliffhanger ending! Aaugh! More! :D Yay! That makes me happy! Thanks!! *g*
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I can't wait for Spike and Logan to have their first conversation.
*bounces happily*
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