LJ Idol Season 9, Week 8: "Yes, And"

May 08, 2014 07:50

"Making a Scene"Dr. Goodman sighed as he stared at the couple on the screen. Adam and Desiree had just finished a heated argument, and while it was ostensibly about whether to get a dog, it had devolved into something much more difficult to listen to ( Read more... )

e unum pluribus, all the world's a stage, isn't it ironic, heart of glass, makes the world go round, pen to paper

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mamas_minion May 9 2014, 19:18:29 UTC
Ooh, it is time to call the attorneys and close the curtain on this relationship. nicely done ( although very sad and very true of most relationships)

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copyright1983 May 10 2014, 01:27:13 UTC
Sadly, while love makes the world go round, there are times when it isn't enough.

Thanks for reading! :)

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oxymoron67 May 9 2014, 19:25:42 UTC
I really like this take on the prompt.

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copyright1983 May 10 2014, 01:27:22 UTC
:) Thanks for reading!

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jem0000000 May 10 2014, 05:10:44 UTC
Mmm, might do them some good to get financial counseling as well as marital -- money puts a lot of stress on relationships.

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copyright1983 May 10 2014, 07:48:42 UTC
Agreed. Thanks for reading! :)

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jem0000000 May 13 2014, 21:55:01 UTC
You're welcome.

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eternal_ot May 10 2014, 12:52:36 UTC
Amazing take! the last line made me chuckle too...good use of the prompt..Well written!

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copyright1983 May 10 2014, 15:10:50 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading! :)

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halfshellvenus May 11 2014, 01:37:46 UTC
These two really aren't suited for each other-- though in counseling, at least they tried to find another option than just breaking up. But they pull in opposite directions so consistently that I don't think counseling can save them. :(

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copyright1983 May 11 2014, 04:04:17 UTC
I know the old saying about "opposites attract", but there are some couples who are so different that I wonder how they ever got together in the first place.

Thanks for reading!

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