Fic (White Collar): In another life (I would make you stay)

Sep 02, 2015 19:26


Title: In another life (I would make you stay)
Author: cookielaura
Characters: Neal, Peter
Pairings: Peter and Neal UST or pre-Peter/Neal/El, mentioned Peter/El
Word count: 1,237
Rating: PG13
Warnings/spoilers: None
Summary: Peter and Neal spend the evening asking each other questions that don’t mean anything.
Notes: Written for runthecon, and the prompt of ‘The one that got ( Read more... )

ship: peter/neal/el, ship: peter/el, fandom: white collar, fanfic, character: peter burke, ship: peter/neal, character: neal caffrey

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kanarek13 September 2 2015, 18:42:00 UTC
Awww, boys! *smacks them lightly* I swear everybody can see the sparks flying between them... but them, lol.

Such a wonderful fill with that underlying ache and longing for something Neal thinks he can't really have. ♥

Love it ♥

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cookielaura September 3 2015, 18:34:20 UTC
Aww thank you for the lovely comment! X

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sinfulslasher September 2 2015, 18:54:25 UTC
Aww man, this one hurt. *hugs Neal tightly*

Loved the ease and intimacy between them. Very much reminds me of Forging Bonds. Wish we had had more scenes like that on the show, so thanks for coming up with this one!

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cookielaura September 3 2015, 18:35:47 UTC
I'm sure Neal is hugging you back!

Aww thank you, I was doing my best to channel the Forging Bonds vibe! X

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halfshellvenus September 2 2015, 19:29:52 UTC
Oh, I love what you did with this prompt. The setup was terrific, and the prompt led to a wonderfully typical Neal story. But all of the hints of wishing, wanting, and heartache that rose up as side-effects came off perfectly and just as clearly.

Lovely!

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cookielaura September 3 2015, 18:36:54 UTC
Aww thank you for the lovely feedback! And thanks for the prompt - I haven't written anything for a couple of months so this was just what I needed to get back into fic!

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enigmaticblues September 2 2015, 19:41:54 UTC
Aw, this was lovely, and just made me ache for Neal.

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cookielaura September 3 2015, 18:37:25 UTC
Thank you so much :)

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vexed_wench September 2 2015, 21:39:30 UTC
That was adorable.

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cookielaura September 3 2015, 18:37:47 UTC
Thank you! :)

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