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[mellyflori]

Title: Dirty Water
Fandom: Master and Commander
Pairing: Aubrey/Maturin
Rating: R
Author: mellyflori
Disclaimer: Characters not mine, not makin' any money, just writing little stories for fun.
Feedback: Would be lovely.

For the contrelamontre traveling challenge. My first posting here. Took the full hour, need some ice cream now. And as jacito so nicely put it: not

Comments

[finduilas_clln]

Wonderful.

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[mellyflori]

*blushy*

Thanks. From you, that means a great deal. :)

[starfishchick]

RAWR, OMG, eeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

Swimming, which you know I love, naked!Stephen OMG, the twinkle in his eye, squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

Could this feedback be any more incoherent?

*babbles like an idiot*

[cruisedirector]

*repeats what starfishchick said and raises her a wibble*

Seriously, this is lovely -- the voices are very right and it has a lovely naughty whimsical feeling that seems very Stephen. *g*