Shine -- Orlando Bloom/Josh Hartnett, PG-13
I don't have the faintest idea where this came from, all I know is that this story pretty much wrote itself. Oh, how I like it when the characters do all the work for me.
( Shine. -- Wherein Josh waits. Then not. )
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You're on a roll, aren't you? Damn you and your ability to shell out things like this, one right after the other!
Much, much love. For you, for this, for Orli's neck, for... yes.
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I'm not so sure. I mean, "Two" was written what, a month ago? Something like that. So it's a rather drawn-out roll. But oh. Josh/Orli. I want it. Muchly.
Much, much love. For you, for this, for Orli's neck, for... yes.
::hugsnuggles:: Much love right back at you, dear. Whee!
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I'm pretty tempted to write Ron Eldard/Orli, but, ah, that'll mean actually completing something. But the idea? Ohyes. Must be more BHDslash around. More like this. Just. More anything. *nods*
By the by, do you plan to post this to the BHD mailing list? They'd probably eat it alive. In a good way, I presume... *chuckles*
So it's a rather drawn-out roll.
A roll is a roll, and damn, rock on!
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Then complete it, dammit! And, uh... which one was Ron?
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There's... a BHD mailing list? What? Where? Why didn't I know this?
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If you did, I might have had to recommend a psychiatrist. Because... yes. Already had to redo the enter graphic on my site, and also add Josh to the background of the LotR RPS page.
Morning, and Josh knows Orlando knows the moment Orlando's eyes meet his across the dining room.
Would it work better if I replaced the second "knows" with "remembers"? Morning, and Josh knows Orlando remembers the moment Orlando's eyes meet his across the dining room.
Can't wait for when you DO write a longer piece on these two.... mmmmmmmm... *drools in anticipation*
I am already drooling in anticipation over the mental images writing this will create.
And tapes! Whee!
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I did it only very recently. There's a pic of him on the index site (the one with the enter graphic) and one on the LotR page.
And teheh, keep studying the pic under the welcome text. One hint: Bishonen. That's all I'm going to say.
(Squees quietly to self.)
Oh, and tapes! Yes!
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The hardness vanishes when Orlando kisses him.
This made my stomach clench. You know, this fluttering half-sick feeling you get when a line gets you.
Beautiful. Josh being fascinated. Loved the slight predator/prey undertones you created with "soon" and "not yet"; with the prey not being weak and frail. Gah. Much loved.
Lovely first paragraph. Distinctively leading to the plot. Was that a Pearl Harbour reference? The shivering linen?
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Mwahaha! That's what I told myself, too. Right. And now I'm working on an Orlando/Josh/Ewan story. But yeah, apart from that, I really am fine.
You know, this fluttering half-sick feeling you get when a line gets you.
Oh yes. I know the feeling. And I love it when stories manage to make me feel that way. It's the good ones that can pull that off, so... Thank you.
Loved the slight predator/prey undertones you created with "soon" and "not yet"; with the prey not being weak and frail.
I don't like submissive!weak!Orli, so of course I had to make him take revenge. Weak!Orli pisses me off. This Orli is strong, but in a way, he also isn't. Am I making sense here? Not sure.
Distinctively leading to the plot. Was that a Pearl Harbour reference? The shivering linen?It was, yes. Not that I've seen PH, there's only so much patritism I can take. I only know that short little scene because it also features in the Faith Hill video for There You'll Be. You know, when I ( ... )
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Finished, yet? You are a tease, you know that?
I don't like submissive!weak!Orli, so of course I had to make him take revenge. Weak!Orli pisses me off. This Orli is strong, but in a way, he also isn't. Am I making sense here? Not sure.
I guess I know what you want to say. Same here. Can't put that in coherent words, though. Gah. I'm so utterly wordy today.
*falls over*
It was, yes. Not that I've seen PH, there's only so much patritism I can take. I only know that short little scene because it also features in the Faith Hill video for There You'll Be. You know, when I saw the vid for the first time, I remember thinking wow when I saw Josh, although I had no idea who he was.*eek* Nieces made me see it. Wanted to peel my brains out with a spoon after five minutes. *eek ( ... )
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I can only imagine. My friends went to see it, and, you know, there was a reason why I didn't go with them. Actually, I find myself cringing at many of the typical Hollywood films lately. There have been a few good German movies recently, in my opinion. And I really do like French movies.
I actually wasn't sure whether or not to watch BHD, I was afraid it would be one hell of a patritism show. I was positively surprised.
But that shivering linen scene was lovely. *nods*
Well, as I said, I've only seen it in Faith Hill's video, but... yes. Much with the yes and the yummy and the Josh. And you say he wasn't all that horrible in PH? I'm somewhat reassured now. And also, the more I find out about him, the more I start to fall in love with him.
Eek!
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