Comments | conri: Rain is cleansing, rain is chilling. (Soi Fong, Bleach)

conri

Rain is cleansing, rain is chilling. (Soi Fong, Bleach)

Nov 15, 2005 11:29

I was looking for nice quotes or haiku about rain for the below animated GIF banner from Bleach.

"Night; and once again,
the while I wait for you, cold wind
turns into rain."
--Shiki Masaoka

And then I ended up trying to write a couple haiku...both of them reference Yoruichi from Soi Fong's POV.

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bleach, fanfic

Comments 4

lawlessearth November 21 2005, 07:29:48 UTC

:) A drabble from Yoruichi's POV. I could never properly write her so kudos to you for doing it so convincingly.

conri November 22 2005, 04:54:02 UTC

I'm glad you found it convincing. This was my first try at writing them, and I don't write too much fanfic. Pictures usually come easier than words for me.

elwhyenen November 22 2005, 01:03:32 UTC

Gah, your haikus are wonderful and the drabble is nicely done.

Lovely drabble, and I can easily see this happening after their fight.

-DEARLY wishes for some sort of conclusion or an explanation after the fight from episode 57.-

You wrote Yoruichi beautifully and convincingly (as lawlessearth had said) and Soi Fong's actions clearly spoke much louder/and more then her words.

:D

conri November 22 2005, 05:02:30 UTC

Thank you for the comments.

I agree with you about a conclusion to the ep 57 fight. It's not the only thing that was left hanging either... I wanted to see Kyouraku, Ukitake, and Komamura in action as well. And I really want to see Soi Fong's bankai sometime. Hear that Kubo? Less Ichigo, more Soi Fong!

P.S. You really like that avatar, huh? It makes me smile everytime I see it because it looks a bit crazy/freaky when I stare at it.