Force

Jan 27, 2009 02:12

Force
PG; SHINee-Taekey; ?; oldfloors
The song continues and Kibum can’t help but notice that Taemin is always just a fraction of a second quicker than he is, and the smallest of an angle slicker than he tries to be.

note a really short piece i wrote in about ten minutes. as such, i have no idea what genre this fic is supposed to fall under.

Force )

pairing: taemin/key, fandom: shinee, #flashfic

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discs January 26 2009, 19:36:56 UTC
Taekey ♥
it's awesome, you did a great job jo :DD

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nautisch January 27 2009, 00:54:11 UTC
I think this is my first time reading Taekey. Or, if it isn't, my second or third. :\ Whatever, irrelevant details.

I've always wondered if Key was jealous of Taemin's dancing, at least just a bit, and that part was really well-written. The Taekey is really, really subtle, and I really like it that way.

Taemin?
Yes, Hyung?
I’m a good dancer, right?
Of course you are, Hyung. You’re the best.

Kibum wants to punch himself in the face when he catches his own wide smile in the mirror of the studio.
I adore this ending. :)

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perkybird January 27 2009, 01:24:28 UTC
i second that; the ending was so adorable. <33
& you really got key's personality down, i could picture everything happening. :DD

TAEKEYTAEKEYTAEKEY!

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jacqandtherat January 27 2009, 05:53:59 UTC
cute cute cute!

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knackchan08 January 28 2009, 07:59:11 UTC
THE ENDING'S SO CUTE WHUT. ♥♥♥

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