Yay, a new story from you, and a new chapter to look forward to every single day for the next fortnight! *bounces happily and makes undignified squee-ing noises*
This is a lovely beginning. Naboo's line really made me giggle, I can so hear him saying it, and your rewind to when Vince started at the zoo was perfect, with him seeing Howard as an old man to begin with and then starting to see him as mature and dashing instead. And oh, the smouldering sexual tension... Wonderful. Just wonderful. Excuse me while I go and read it again several times!
Your backstories are always so good! Love the Chris De Burgh explanation. How sad that after all those years Vince still hasn't gotten physical with Howard! I trust that within the 14 next chapters that will be resolved! :)
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This is a lovely beginning. Naboo's line really made me giggle, I can so hear him saying it, and your rewind to when Vince started at the zoo was perfect, with him seeing Howard as an old man to begin with and then starting to see him as mature and dashing instead. And oh, the smouldering sexual tension... Wonderful. Just wonderful. Excuse me while I go and read it again several times!
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