Pancake Night Part 7

[concupiscence66]

Title:  Pancake Night
Author:  Concupid
Rating: R
Warnings:  extended discussion about masturbating
Pairing:  Howard/Vince, Howard/OC
Summary:  There's magic in the air for Sebastian but not our boys.
Disclaimer:  I own nothing, I'm just writing for fun because the folks at BSH rock!

Comments

[life_downsized]

"Masturbating and pancake makin', this is me in England, UK, you say, wine gums and bootlaces, so many tastey glazes..." Sebastian didn't normally write little songs about his day but somehow, in this house, it felt right.

Just...just...the power of the crimp!

Tony! Oh, God, the thought of Kirk and Sebastian...and that being the only thing to turn Vince away.

I love you, I love your writing, I love this story.

[concupiscence66]

Thank you and I love you more! I was worried the tease might just piss people off but there is a reason for it. They've got to get the chemistry sorted out.

Can you imagine being off your head and meeting Kirk and Tony Harrison? What a nightmare.

[elle_lovvie]

[snorts] Vince is way nicer than I am. I wouldn't leave a maverick who is "hung like a horse". Also Saboo is hellllla sexy, Sebastian could hook up with him. What if he got off on his condescension? I see great things in his future.

Sleeping Howard just lay there looking friendly. Everything was easier when Howard was asleep.

This would be a lovely dubcon/noncon muahaha.

and I agree his crimp is awesome!!!

[concupiscence66]

I was going to put a line where Vince suddenly understands why Howard thought the Midnight Barber was perverse but I decided a) Vince just really wouldn't see anything wrong with it because it never occurs to him to do something unkind b) my audience isn't stupid, they get the joke.

That blue boosh idea did occur to me. Am I capable of writing a one shot and not a massive novel? Magic 8-ball says, "Meh. We'll see."

Sebastian man of action telling Saboo he needs a wank. You Utter Genius.

[catwallada]

Poor Sebastian. I've been sleeping in my parents' living room for the past month so he has my fullest sympathies. I can't wait to see how his little problem gets sorted, I hope it involves Saboo.
It's so sweet how much Vince wants to be Howard's first. I hope them being out of sync was just nerves, I feel kind of sad for them. At least their injuries where kind of amusing, it was like a dirty black and white comedy.
Howard is hung like a horse? I think that made me briefly forget how to breathe.

Re: Sebastian man of action telling Saboo he needs a wank. You Utter Genius.

[concupiscence66]

Here's a glimpse into my writing technique (My book on writing will be called "The Scribbling of a Retard"): I tried to use 'loose associations' when writing Sebastian high. When I assess clients for psychosis or for being high, one of the things I look for is just sort of rambling just barely connected thoughts. So that's how I wrote Sebastian and I tried not to edit other than actual type-os. Normally, I'd think talking about Howard having an enormous dick was too tropey but for the sake of my art!- I left in the hung like a horse bit.

Sympathies for sleeping on a couch!

Re: Sebastian man of action telling Saboo he needs a wank. You Utter Genius.

[catwallada]

It's more of a sofa bed but thanks for the sympathies. It's making porn writing very difficult :-(

Re: Sebastian man of action telling Saboo he needs a wank. You Utter Genius.

[concupiscence66]

Yeah, my husband is sitting write next to me. He doesn't know about my secret identity as Super Perv.

[camdentish]

oh god i love sebastian

[concupiscence66]

:^) I like him, myself. There's always the fear an OC will be a big fail.

[pitpony13]

I always suspected Howard would be hung like a horse; it's his big, manly hands I think. And I feel sorry for them being all out of sync :(

I want more!!! Please and thank you!

[concupiscence66]

You don't rock a porn stache and a cardigan in your thirties if you're not packing some heat!