This chapter was lovely. All of it. I like the way Howard's trying to hold on to what he learned under the gender-swap potion and how he can recognise the way Vince subtly takes charge. It was all just lovely.
Have I mentioned how much I love this story? Because I really do love it. A lot. It is very special to me, and this chapter is no exception. Everything, as always, feels very real and imperfect, like there are real consequences here. I can see how much they're learning and growing, but I can also see that it isn't easy, and you feel that sense of anxiety about how they're going to respond to each little new bump or challenge... that's a tough thing to convey, but you've nailed it, and that's part of what makes this story so fantastic
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